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When Writing a Verse

A poet, when writing a verse Should into her feelings immerse For she won’t survive If she tries to deprive What she writes of what might be adverse. Though, of course, she just might intersperse Words to soften a blow or reverse Certain thoughts that contrive To cause damage to thrive But to out and out lie would be worse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/10/2021 5:34:00 PM
Refraining from writing so blunt or perverse. Is a sign of consideration for the sense of decency and respect for others. And yes, while still getting a message through that expresses and instills your thoughts and emotions.
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Date: 5/4/2021 6:54:00 PM
Haha don't deprive yourself... Well penned
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Date: 5/4/2021 8:23:00 AM
Which is why I never deprive myself "For she won’t survive If she tries to deprive" Bravo! Trixie and I are both clapping Ilene.
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Date: 4/29/2021 6:39:00 PM
Oh, this is heavy, to the point, good observation.
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Date: 4/28/2021 12:12:00 PM
Many Soupers write odes about things they know very little about, e.g., birds, scripture, et al, yet their work receives applause and win contests, so nothing ventured, nothing gained. Aloha! Rico
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Date: 4/27/2021 11:18:00 PM
Well said ilene. I wish I could write even one! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/27/2021 4:32:00 PM
thanks for the smile, i dont lie with my poems but a little poetic licence does creep in from time to time lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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