When Wolves Cry

Out there,

   across the frozen tundra,

   the wilderness place ----

   the ancient song sings;

   returning, 

   since the birth of wood and glade,

When lakes fell from the sky ----

   the first time,

   the first kiss:

   a howl at the moon


Gather the night, the silver night,

   of moon glowing a shimmering song,

   gather her woodland children

   to the twilight opera;

   bring sleeping peace ----

   bring on the howling minstrel


The night dreamed well

   while sleeping souls slept;

   the piper played in the hills,

   midst tree-land burrows,

   gentle tumbling vale,

   'tween the flowing springs ----

   crying love


His love for her,

    it sang,

    would she cry?


Would she answer?


And she did:

   howling across the steps of time,

   he was yonder ----

   too far to kiss,

But too close to lose his love again,

   to say: ' I love you'

   (when wolves cry)



Keith Hunt (c) 1999  First appeared in  'The Plowman'  2000

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/4/2014 12:06:00 AM
This is a great poem. You have described Nature at it's best. Thanks for sharing and God bless you... Lucilla
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Date: 5/17/2014 2:49:00 PM
Dear Keith, I love the way you describe the birth of a planet "When lakes fell from the sky." You really should get your work published in your own book! Few can write in this style so well. Love, Carolyn
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 5/18/2014 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Carolyn, I always was fond of this poem, one of my first better works; I was considering self-publishing, but I'm going to approach a few publishers by this autumn. I need a few more recent magazine publications --- but I have quite a bit of material, and a 4,000 line epic in the works. Love Always, Keith
Date: 5/13/2014 8:31:00 PM
Took me into my favorite woods in my youth. No wolves there then but was black bear. I a young child armed only with a small caliber rifle imagined slaying "monsters".lol My Native American heritage honors the wolf. Your write greatly honored it as well. Bravo!
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Date: 5/13/2014 10:06:00 AM
Love this poem! It transports me back in time. The rich imagery reminds me of sceneries from the Game of Thrones, "Winter is coming." Great write!
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Date: 5/13/2014 10:25:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed Pandita! :-)
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