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When Wendy Grew Up

Woman, woman, let go of me I remember again how to cry and laugh in the same breath How far I have come, I wonder to comfort a sobbing boy by leaving the room to think I believe I remember you I once flew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/28/2008 10:52:00 PM
Peter Pan? Very nice. Thanks for your comments and pointing out my typos. I had completely missed that. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/28/2008 10:45:00 PM
Wow, nice poem Julia, I wrote a poem about Peter Pan called A Romantic Adventure. Check it out if you get a chance. This poem was almost a Diminished Hexaverse. "5 lines, then 4 lines, then 3 lines, then 2 lines, ending with one word. Hope you have a Happy and Safe New Year...Raul
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