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When We Were Royals

Leaning against the warmth of old oak, 

I recall your sun burnt skin that summer.

As I let my fingers linger on the side of the bench where you used to sit, 

a memory - like noon day’s sun light, seeps into my senses.

A light wind ruffles my hair at the nape of my neck, 

that same spot you liked to kiss.

You said we were royals as we scattered bread crumbs for our loyal subjects.

Where have those pigeons gone? 

I lift my face to sky and close my eyes,

 breathing in the scent of nearby roses; 

suddenly something tickles my cheek! I open my eyes to see a butterfly,

its color that of your sun burnt skin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ashley Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 6:39 PM
Dear Andrea, your golden poetic pen creates a tender reminiscent mood of lost love. Romantic melancholy so beautifully done. Congratulations for your success in Rob’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 4:25 PM
Thanks for taking time to read my poem
Carmack Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 6:36 PM
This one took me back to several special times in my past. Congrats on your placement and thank you for entering this poem.
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 4:24 PM
Thanks so much.
Anaya Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 4:11 PM
Congratulations Andrea! An oldie but a goodie i see. I always take pleasure in reading your younger romance days, it's nostalgic and gives that vibe I like. April's blessings
Delaney Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 12:48 PM
Memories of a lost love, Andrea. So unusual to see a free verse from you but it is good to step outside our usual sometimes. Yes - you are a royal here and a deserving one. Congrats. SuZ
Narain Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 9:03 AM
uch a nice poem. Congrats on your win.
Mcintosh Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 7:50 AM
Wonderful writing. I just love this. Congrats on your top win. Much love and blessings, Gina
Empress Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:40 AM
Ah beautiful write dear andrea, how gorgeous. You definitely selected a brilliant poem, i love the imagery, alliterations, assonance ah those internal rhymes, clever wordplay and also that last line is so poetic. This definitely is one of my fave by you. Pleasure reading you always. Sending you light
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December 6, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Oh wow you went back to 2015, I actually think I remember this one... I had recently joined soup in my first life back then... You will always been the queen of soup, Andrea and what a lovely blessing you are to this place... I've never heard anyone say a bad thing about you.... Long may your pen post on here for decades.. Congratulations on having your poem showcased..
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 1:35 PM
hmmm, I guess you have never spoken with a few people who don't like me here. But I'm glad if no one you know has ever sad a bad thing about me. At least three people have said hurtful things to me right on the blogs or in the comments of my poems. I hope I can continue for decades too. This might be unlikely the way I feel sometimes. Thanks so much for this delightful contest, and may your pen never give out.
Duet Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 2:30 AM
I just love this, Andrea. It is so lovely and romantic. Congrats on your placement in the contest too. Faved. :D
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 6:52 PM
Back with more congrats, Andrea.
Cornish Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 9:12 AM
Love the touching way you portray these thoughts as older age's gentle reflections.
Barden Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 9:52 PM
Oh I love this one, Buddy, so romantic and melancholy and sad, and you've said 'juste assez', with just the right words ... that is mastery of language and phrasing, and one of my favorite things. Superb write my friend! (2015?? Wow - I wish I had the catalog to draw on for this marathon, although I can't even remember all I've written in the last two years, lol!). Blessings! :-) <3
Haight Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 2:48 PM
Andrea, back again to congratulate you once for your nice placement in this marathon contest. I really enjoyed reading it again. Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 9:37 PM
Back with a NEW congrats, Andrea! :-) Janice
Roper Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 9:05 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea, great imagery . Have a nice weekend. hugs Eve ~,`*
Toney Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 6:07 PM
Andrea, your free verse evokes melancholy and delight at the same time. Brilliantly done! Lorde would approve ;) Congratulations on your win on Mile 22 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final, which is just 5 contests away! ~Mark
Haight Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 6:46 PM
Lovely memories expressed in your beautiful poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Congratulations on your win with this awesome write! Perfect ending, poignant and unexpected.
Roper Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 8:44 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea, excellent write. Hugs Eve ~`*
Canerdy Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:10 PM
So lovely and nostalgic--CONGRATS!! Janice
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 3:55 PM
so wonderful to read this little gem again Andrea, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 3:35 PM
What a beautiful lovely poem, Andrea. Congrats on a most deserving win.
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April 3, 2018 at 2:20 PM
GORGEOUS!!! Stunning piece of poetry Andrea! A winningmost poem :) xomo!
Day Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Congrats on your win for the "Any Poem You Ever Penned" poetry contest. I enjoyed your work - Jesse
Smith Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 10:39 PM
Yet another fine win Andrea, and well deserved...
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