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When Water Sings to Sky - Hiku4

Written: May 19, 2025, for contest by Brian Stran ******** r i v e r s p l i t s the h i l l s not in a n g e r but in s o n g yield, and you r e s h a p e

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/21/2025 4:44:00 PM

Wise perspective- :)

Valsa George

Date: 5/21/2025 10:11:00 AM

So very creative- both in thought and layout. You are there always to excel....! If it is for a contest, all the best, dear friend.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 5/21/2025 9:10:00 AM

Congratulations dear poet on your top placement in his contest with a marvellous write on the song of rain and its constructive work . Wish you a delightful day.

Howard Kerr

Date: 5/21/2025 3:09:00 AM

Sotto, First and foremost congratulations on your success with this elegant Hiku. Pearls of poetic imagery and innovative design of work makes for a platinum piece. A must for every collection Howard

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/20/2025 10:39:00 AM

What a creative write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away...............

Maria Williams

Date: 5/20/2025 1:55:00 AM

An interesting layout, making your Haikyu all the more meaningful. Good luck in the contest dear Sotto...Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/19/2025 12:35:00 PM

- A haiku reshape to hiku ... wonderfully written ... a popular form lately, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/19/2025 12:30:00 PM

Interesting layout and thoughts penned. Thanks for sharing. It is amazing how rivers and creeks are constantly changing the area around them with flooding, etc. Sara K