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Inspired by U Got the Look

For Karen Jones' Prince Roger Nelson Songs Poetry Contest

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Inspired by U Got the Look Boy, when you walked in, my heart went BOOM. Best-looking guy you were inside the entire room. Face of an angel, eyes so soft it seems I never saw a guy so schweet except inside my dreams. I don’t need some macho man with tattoos or a beard or some girly boy extra sensitive and weird. You are like a Christmas gift, the best I ever got, saying everything just right and looking hot, hot, hot. In this world of boys and girls, I know lots of fishes. But you are the best catch, for you simply are de-lish-es. I can’t wait to cozy up beside you in your car. In your red Corvette, baby, you can take me far.

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Date: 6/20/2025 9:23:00 AM
Hi Petal, I'd hazard a guess as to who the inspiration is for this poem but I think I already know :) like the little bit of poetic license with de-lish-es. Take care, Richard
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Date: 6/19/2025 11:53:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations poetess on your top winner in Karen`s contest with a pleasant romantic poem depicting a skilful pen. Wish you a cheerful day.
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Date: 6/19/2025 2:36:00 AM
This was a fun read and a winner! Thanks for supporting my contest Andrea!
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Date: 6/18/2025 3:05:00 PM
Excellent Andrea congrats on another worthy winner!
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Date: 6/18/2025 5:49:00 AM
Very sweet and romantic poem!
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Date: 6/18/2025 4:38:00 AM
How cute. I like the rhythm and rhyme plus the theme. Reads like a good contender to me for a contest. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 6/17/2025 3:32:00 PM
my hubby is also the best gift ever...God given. Good luck with the contest, too. yellow rose
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Date: 6/17/2025 1:15:00 PM
- A Christmas gift ... that many girls dream of, Andrea :) - A lovely poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 6/17/2025 11:52:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun "When U Walked In" write. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away........
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Date: 6/17/2025 11:12:00 AM
Charming poem, Andrea; I enjoy your inventive composition.
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Date: 6/17/2025 10:43:00 AM
romantic memories.
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Date: 6/17/2025 8:58:00 AM
Cute memoirs- cool and romantic
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Date: 6/17/2025 7:45:00 AM
Lovely, cute; I did have a 58 red corvette back then. When I could see the lines in the road I frequently crossed. If not for the Grace of God.... The music was a lot better also. Can't listen to the modern crap. My mother loved Presley. Not just generational.
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Date: 6/17/2025 7:17:00 AM
This is so cute! You are quite the romantic…ooh la la!
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