Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

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Inspired by U Got the Look

For Karen Jones' Prince Roger Nelson Songs Poetry Contest

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When U Walked In

Inspired by U Got the Look

Boy, when you walked in, my heart went BOOM.
Best-looking guy you were inside the entire room.
Face of an angel, eyes so soft it seems
I never saw a guy so schweet except inside my dreams.

I don’t need some macho man with tattoos or a beard
or some girly boy extra sensitive and weird.
You are like a Christmas gift, the best I ever got,
saying everything just right and looking hot, hot, hot.

In this world of boys and girls, I know lots of fishes.
But you are the best catch, for you simply are de-lish-es.
I can’t wait to cozy up beside you in your car.
In your red Corvette, baby, you can take me far.

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Richard D Seal June 20, 2025 at 9:23 AM Hi Petal, I'd hazard a guess as to who the inspiration is for this poem but I think I already know :) like the little bit of poetic license with de-lish-es. Take care, Richard

Krishnanand Guptar June 19, 2025 at 11:53 AM Heartiest congratulations poetess on your top winner in Karen`s contest with a pleasant romantic poem depicting a skilful pen. Wish you a cheerful day.

Karen Jones June 19, 2025 at 2:36 AM This was a fun read and a winner! Thanks for supporting my contest Andrea!

John Hamilton June 18, 2025 at 3:05 PM Excellent Andrea congrats on another worthy winner!

Abdullah Alhemaidy June 18, 2025 at 5:49 AM Very sweet and romantic poem!

Sara Kendrick June 18, 2025 at 4:38 AM How cute. I like the rhythm and rhyme plus the theme. Reads like a good contender to me for a contest. Way to go. Sara K

sara Etgen-Baker June 17, 2025 at 3:32 PM my hubby is also the best gift ever...God given. Good luck with the contest, too. yellow rose

Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2025 at 1:15 PM - A Christmas gift ... that many girls dream of, Andrea :) - A lovely poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith June 17, 2025 at 11:52 AM I enjoyed reading your fun "When U Walked In" write. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away........

Sotto Poet June 17, 2025 at 11:12 AM Charming poem, Andrea; I enjoy your inventive composition.

Jay Narain June 17, 2025 at 10:43 AM romantic memories.

Paige Hind June 17, 2025 at 8:58 AM Cute memoirs- cool and romantic

Joseph P. DiMino June 17, 2025 at 7:45 AM Lovely, cute; I did have a 58 red corvette back then. When I could see the lines in the road I frequently crossed. If not for the Grace of God.... The music was a lot better also. Can't listen to the modern crap. My mother loved Presley. Not just generational.

Kim Rodrigues June 17, 2025 at 7:17 AM This is so cute! You are quite the romantic…ooh la la!