When Twilight Comes

When twilight comes,
be morn or eve,
a time when cares 
and fears take leave,
when the sun arises,
when the sun does set,
when the trials of the world
have not come yet,
nor will they you beset,
when ferns and flowers
are tender with dew,
when dreams 
that you've dreamt
become alive and new,
when the stir of a breeze
and a rustle in the trees
become as music
to the soul
and the landscape all about
is as a heroic Grecian frieze,
when Time knows no time,
when sorrow has no pain,
when grief is lost forever,
when joy is free to reign
when the heart 
is filled beyond measure
when Love abounds 'til never
then will you see and feel
things more precious
than all the world's 
golden store of treasure.
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 2:59 AM
what a peaceful and uplifting read, a poem worthy of POTW designation. especially liked: "...are tender with dew, when dreams that you've dreamt become alive and new, Thanks for filling my heart with hope this morning.
Firlotte Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 7:49 AM
Again, thank you very, very much! Yes, there is hope, always!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 6:50 AM
What a lovely sentiment! … and the landscape all about is as a heroic Grecian frieze… Congrats on POTW!
Firlotte Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 7:47 AM
Thank you very much, Kim! I truly appreciate your kind words! Have a wonderful...and wonder-filled day!!
Rodgers Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 9:52 AM
Hello Gregory, Congrats on POTW! I don’t know if you meant for it to feel like a prayer, but that’s how it landed for me. In both in a religious sense and human sense, in that deeply personal way of longing for stillness, for beauty untouched by the noise of the world. Excellent Read, Blessings, Gregory, Daniel
Firlotte Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 11:01 AM
Hello Daniel -- I am so blessed to read your message. And, yes, it is a prayer in every sense. I want my words to send Love and Peace into the world and give joy to the sad, give solace to the heartbroken, to give peace to those searching for Love. Sending blessing back to you!
Firlotte Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 10:20 AM
Hello Daniel -- I am so blessed to read your message. And, yes, it is a prayer in every sense. I want my words to send Love and Peace into the world and give joy to the sad, give solace to the heartbroken, to give peace to those searching for Love. Sending blessing back to you!
Nicole Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 3:38 PM
Yes, ' when the heart is filled beyond measure. ' That time leaves me floating beyond the clouds. Your thoughts hold many emotions, Gregory. This is so beautiful and tender. Congratulations on Poem of the Week. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Firlotte Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 10:26 PM
Brandy, I am deeply touched by your words. This poem was written to share all that is good in the universe, and in one another, and in all that is divine in the spiritual realm. I want my poems to speak to the heart and the soul. Thank you for allowing me to share this particular poem with you. I send my best as well, and hugs, too!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 10:36 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "When Twilight Comes" write. Many questions in life with few answers. Lovely Ending... Have a blessed day with your win...........
Firlotte Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 11:56 AM
Paula! Thank you so very, very much for your kind words. Wishing you a blessed day too!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 2:53 AM
an outstanding poem filled with imagery of how timeless eternity will look and fill. This poem resonated with me...congrats on POTW!
Firlotte Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 7:35 AM
Sara! Thank you very, very much for your kind words. I so appreciate it. Have a wonderful day and week ahead.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 2:38 AM
A lovely poem Gregory. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week… Beryl
Firlotte Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 7:36 AM
Beryl! I am so delighted to hear your kind words. Many thanks! Wishing you a wonderful day and week ahead.
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