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When True Love Is Found

As the clock strikes midnight And there's a full moon in the sky Into our room she walks Something catches my eye It's the black lacy piece she's wearing Hemmed low to draw me in Revealing curves of delight Tanned undulations of skin Her sexy swagger delights As I turn from the window to view The man in me hungers Excitement now flows through We stand in hold together Our hands in wandering mode I pray this night never ends As our future hours erode Our cries like anthem sounds Echo from our hearts Two souls from broken pasts Cementing their new start We awake in the morning Spooned from captured joy This first of many a night True love, this girl and boy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/18/2014 11:33:00 PM
"two souls from broken pasts. cementing their new start.." wow!! i love that lines... :) but somehow submitting to such part of loving isn't at all a guarantee.. The sexual act spices the physical expression but it's more than it.. :) and I wish guys know this.. though this world may seem so modern now and it seems "sex" like a casual thing... i wish some will still think otherwise... passionate write mr. JAmes.. !
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Date: 10/20/2014 3:33:00 PM
When true Love is found, their Love abounds. There is still some honourability in this lovely world relating to what they want from each other. But I agree, "sex" is a loose canon historically, everywhere - James :)
Date: 7/23/2010 7:33:00 AM
Very passionate...I missed this one somehow..Must have been while I was really feeling pain or while on vacation..Sara
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Date: 7/2/2010 1:29:00 PM
Young love portrayed in its romantic finery, dear James. (I tried the lace nighty thing to no avail once, just a bit of laughter from my late husband.) Very sensual scenario conveyed in perfect rhyme and meter! You're the "passion prince" on Poetry Soup. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/2/2010 8:53:00 AM
Hey, James thnx for leaving comments on my writes, my friend. Always appreciated as you know! Later, your friend, JA
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Date: 7/2/2010 12:40:00 AM
When the 'Highland boy' pens passion,emotions take a stroll,He make us want to read him,and ask for just one more :)!Love and passion is the greatest gift of life after life itself,tmfvs!C
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Date: 7/1/2010 11:17:00 PM
This is so lovelly James ,Two souls from broken pasts love it sarah xx
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Date: 7/1/2010 10:33:00 PM
Sweet and beautiful. Happiness always!
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Date: 7/1/2010 7:33:00 PM
Sweet and loving write,, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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Date: 7/1/2010 6:33:00 PM
A very nice pen picture "she" and you yearning for each other
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Date: 7/1/2010 6:29:00 PM
Hi James, love this poem. Romance and passion and then true love. Beautiful (and very lucky) ~ Sharon :)
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