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Copyright Protected, ID 11-1561-027-07
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, July 11, 2023
For the International Contest, Kissed By The Passing Breeze Of Awakening
Sponsor, John Lawless, Judged 08/07/2023

Eleventh Place

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When I am troubled I walk in nature, and soon my troubles are far, far away; I start to notice the bird songs in the trees, and beautiful nature all around me. And I am kissed by a passing breeze ! When I am full of tears I seek nature, though grief is like a stone holding me down; the trees wrap me in silent peace, and a stream babbles a melody for my soul. And the passing breeze is an awaking ! When I am hurt and broken by this life, a walk in nature helps me to let go; I stop to pick a wildflower bouquet, like I used to for my sweet mother once. And I am kissed by a passing breeze ! When I am unloved, lonely and sad, I remember that God is my best friend; and he created nature for me and you, so, on my walk he comes to me as a sigh. And the passing breeze is an awaking !

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Date: 8/7/2023 5:15:00 PM
somehow we all seek comfort in the arms of a "mother" oftentimes it is "Mother Nature" who soothes us with a passing breeze.
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Date: 8/8/2023 4:22:00 PM
John, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and for the lovely comment, blessings !
Date: 7/12/2023 5:08:00 AM
A lovely write, Constance. Nature is a great cure for sadness. If this is for a contest BOL! Hope all is well. Charlie
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Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:48:00 PM
Charlie, thank you so much for the compliment, and encouragement, all is well !
Date: 7/11/2023 9:04:00 AM
Beautiful picture and poem , enjoying the beauty God has created that many miss by being consumed of worldly things, blessed are the eyes that see God's majestic power surrounding and embracing, comforting with the breezes
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Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:49:00 PM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment, and wonderful comment !
Date: 7/11/2023 8:55:00 AM
oh Constance I can relate to this so so much, I find my troubles melt away albeit for a short time when I am outdoors especially when i walk by the sea. What a super poem for John's contest, good luck:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/16/2023 3:50:00 PM
Jan, thank you so much for the lovely comment and encouragement yes, nature heals the heart, hugs !
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