When Time Is a Luxury

Like quiet raindrops, silence falls serene
both on the mountains lying to my east
and on this peaceful valley spring-time green.
I take a book outside so I can feast
on words of beauty as I take the last
sweet rays of sunlight warm upon my skin.
Such time is short. Late afternoon flees fast.
But not to relish it would be a sin.
Calm is the weather, and there is no breeze,
so pages in my book lie undisturbed.
There’s nothing to distract me. I’m at ease
and tranquil on my deck - so unperturbed.
Since hushed and still is all my world, I feel
a luxury is time like this to steal!

May 13, 2021
For Writing Prompt - Calm - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

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La France Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 4:15 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Calm-Challenge with your wonderful poem, love _Constance
Evans Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 10:45 PM
Congrats, Andrea. Great imagery.
Alex Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 10:19 PM
Congratulations!
Lindley Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 7:36 PM
You my friend are truly gifted as this sonnet illustrates so very well! Each and every verse leading to a recognition on life, time and the journey of wading through this world and living. A fav-,a gleaming gem too. God bless..
Pathak Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 11:15 PM
Ah, what a lovely sonnet.. honestly after a long time I've read such a good one on poetry sites, Andrea. My best wishes, stay safe, you're a jewel...
Daniel Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 2:32 AM
Oh! So serene and beautiful, Andrea:)
Jayasankar Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Andrea what a beautiful poem... Seems you really enjoy your serene corner from where your poetic gems glow... Loved this .... used all the words SO perfectly... Best wishes in the contest.... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 4:21 PM
yes, dear, I sure do enjoy writing in the sunshine on my deck. But I need a lawn chair. My joints are getting bad and I am like an old lady trying to get up off the ground from where i have been sitting propped against the wall!
Theraven Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 7:00 AM
Andrea, I never believed ten syllables were enough to describe scant minutes in time. Your quatrains came through, how precious a moment is relished in this poem 'When Time is a Luxury'. -Richard
Buhagiar Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 5:30 AM
You are a poet par excellence. Constance will love this sonnet. All words used perfectly.
Horsman Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 9:49 PM
Yes reading poetry as good as this, is time so enjoyed.
Ball Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 5:06 PM
This is absolutely beautiful Andrea. Wonderful description and imagery. For sure this should be a winner. God Bless, JB
Poet Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 4:55 PM
You penned a lovely sonnet, Andrea; this is going to be a top win hopefully. Best regards
Turner Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 3:14 PM
This one will definitely lower your blood pressure:) A very calming poem, Andrea. I've seen the mountains you look at and they are beautiful to say the least. Good luck!
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 2:46 PM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Good use of those words. It reads like a calm wonderful place to reside. Your visit to my page is encouraging. Sara
Alex Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 2:43 PM
My God! Such peaceful Writing!
Pandit Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 2:31 PM
Much peace and serenity in your write--sounds like you found "me" time to enjoy the beauty of nature. Silence so pretty!
Hankins Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 1:01 PM
It seems like the older we get the more we appreciate every moment of quiet reflecrtion. Nice poem, Andrea.
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