When Thirsty Earth Begged Its Brother Sky

When Thirsty Earth Begged Its Brother Sky

When thirsty Earth cries, for much needed rain
Sky beams ever brighter, said not again.
Why cry thus to me, ask your mortal men,
they steal your bounty and live in dark sin?

Earth heard and let out more desperate moans
Sky rumbled back, no rain in clear tones.
Earth begged oceans and forests to plead
please ask brother Sky to fill our great need.

Again Sky answered with angrier sounds
told Earth, stop men from going out of bounds.
Earth moaned louder and then pleaded some more
asking Sky, some rain please, this I implore.

Later Earth and brother Sky came to terms
rains came so heavy, it woke sleeping worms!

R.J. Lindley 
August 12th, 1974
Sonnet,( Native American Tale)
Inspired by a story that my Native American grandfather told me
when I was about 9/10 years old.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 4/27/2018 1:57:00 PM
Very interesting. I've never thought of trying to turn a legend into a poem. Nicely done!
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Date: 4/26/2018 10:41:00 AM
Hi Robert, once more it is wonderful to read one of your excellent sonnets. I loved the pictures your words painted on the canvas of my mind. Still singing at your best Robert. A joy to drop by and read once again. This little tale goes into my faves. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 4/27/2018 7:31:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I think my retelling of the story in poetic verse fails. Nevertheless, it stays...
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