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In a place of no world clatter I wish to dwell, like a gate of withdrawal I secure my door; I close my windows tight and wish the world farewell, wrapped and veiled in a serenity I adore. Like a gate of withdrawal- I secure my door, enveloping myself in this dark hidden place; wrapped and veiled in a serenity . . . I adore, and clouds sail across the sky and stars shine with grace. Enveloping myself . . . in this dark hidden place, the bright flowers outside sway in a secret dance; and clouds sail across the sky- and stars shine with grace, with no words spoken I am concealed in a trance. The bright flowers outside sway . . . in a secret dance, locked and sheltered with sweet incense I watch the moon; with no words spoken- I am concealed in a trance, away from all torment and protected, I commune. Locked and sheltered with sweet incense- I watch the moon, I close my windows tight and wish the world farewell; away from all torment and protected . . . I commune, in a place- of no world clatter I wish to dwell. _______________________________ August 30, 2019 Poetry/Pantoum/When The World Is Too Loud Copyright Protected, ID 19-1177-031-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Silence sponsor, Silent One First Place

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Date: 9/6/2019 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, this flows beautifully, it does put you in a trance-
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Constance La France
Date: 9/7/2019 8:27:00 AM
Michelle, thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful ~
Date: 9/6/2019 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance. Great poem.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/7/2019 8:26:00 AM
Subimal, thanks for the congratulations and compliment ~
Date: 9/6/2019 5:46:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful 1st place win, D.H. :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/7/2019 8:26:00 AM
Anne-lise, thank you so much for the beautiful and the congratulations !
Date: 9/5/2019 5:25:00 PM
I love this form and your poem. Congratulations on you win. Xoxo
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Constance La France
Date: 9/7/2019 8:24:00 AM
Jeanne, thank you for the love and the congratulations ~
Date: 9/5/2019 4:35:00 PM
I told you this one was a perfect entry...congrats on your first place win :) hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 9/7/2019 8:24:00 AM
Sandra, thank you so much for the congrats and believing in my writing ~
Date: 9/5/2019 3:05:00 PM
A beautifully composed entry Constance, that is so deserving of your First place honor! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 9/6/2019 10:44:00 AM
Connie, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations!
Date: 9/5/2019 2:54:00 PM
Well done for trying a pantoum, which you wrote very well.. it flows and makes sense, a sign of an excellent pantoum.. congratulations on first place in the contest..
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Constance La France
Date: 9/6/2019 10:44:00 AM
Silent thank you for the inspiring contest and for my placement, appreciate
Date: 8/31/2019 8:20:00 AM
nice form and beautifully penned piece, a perfect entry for the contest! Good luck my friend :) hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2019 3:57:00 PM
Sandra thanks for the compliment and the encouragement

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