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When The Stork Returns

Dusky, azure sky looks down The ochre earth awaits you Near and dear have a deep frown On the deathbed, you know too Time is coming pay no heed To the wonders of this world You need many a good deed Before Heaven is unfurled Dig in your sinful pocket Sieve through the evil amassed May you find the right ticket 'Fore, in the grave, you are cast Old fond memories return unwanted memories too Spiteful foes in your sojourn Enjoy your demise and boo Nothing shall count 'cept your deeds Neither wealth shall help nor fame righteous actions are your seeds To grow, protect from Hell's flame. mbfarookh

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/21/2024 1:27:00 PM

MB, your poem is a powerful exploration of life's inevitable journey. The vivid imagery of the dusky azure sky, ochre earth, and the deep frown of those left behind evokes a contemplative mood. The verses urging to pay heed to the wonders of the world and emphasizing righteous deeds are thought-provoking. Your poetic wisdom shines in conveying that only righteous actions will shield from Hell's flame. A profound and reflective piece. Blessings, Daniel

MB Farookh
Date: 1/21/2024 8:16:00 PM

Daniel, thank you for such an insightful comment and helping my confidence grow. I am profoundly touched. You made my day. Thank you once again for your kind comments. Stay blessed!