Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

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- When the Snow Melts -

When nature throws away the winter's shackles
Discovered in the garden or the woods
Even the audible perception
The stiffest coldest long winter
After discovering it
The sun's glorious beams
The first small flowers
Pure happiness
Celebrate 
New nests
Proof












29/03/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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A MELTING SNOWBALL - Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
3rd place in the contest

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Vladislav Raven December 24, 2018 at 10:18 AM Hi Anne-Lise, such a wonderful write from your pen. This is such a soft, beautiful write. When the snow melts, the proof shows its beautiful little head. After the snow melts, beauty does lift its head. A fave. Have a wonderful Christmas Anne-Lise. hugs....Mike. XX Anne-Lise Andresen December 26, 2018 at 8:29 AM - Many thanks for visiting and fave on my little spring poem, my firend Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley April 28, 2018 at 8:36 AM LOVE THE EXQUISITE BEAUTY OF YOUR-- PROOF.. From first first to last word, your poetic talents shine bright.. A fav.... Anne-Lise Andresen April 28, 2018 at 12:46 PM - Many thanks for your visit, fav. and comment, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Gentry April 19, 2018 at 11:02 AM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write. Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2018 at 11:09 AM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper April 17, 2018 at 7:52 PM Beautiful verse , Sunshine, congratulations on your win .. Hugs Eve ~`* Anne-Lise Andresen April 18, 2018 at 2:26 AM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight April 17, 2018 at 7:42 PM Lovely spring imagery, Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra Anne-Lise Andresen April 18, 2018 at 2:26 AM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Reason A. Poteet April 17, 2018 at 1:16 PM Very nice Sunshine. Great piece to accompany a lovely pic of springtime. Salutations on your award. Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2018 at 1:22 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, R.A.P. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison April 17, 2018 at 11:23 AM Dropping back to say congrats on your win Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2018 at 12:20 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier April 17, 2018 at 10:45 AM Congrats on your bronze medal finish with this delightful gem, Sunshine. Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2018 at 12:19 PM - Many thanks Line, for my win and your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Faulkner April 17, 2018 at 9:22 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest with this lovely poem- Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2018 at 12:19 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Juliet Ligon April 13, 2018 at 5:47 PM I love how you made the form to mirror with the melting of snow. Nicely done! Anne-Lise Andresen April 14, 2018 at 11:51 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Juliet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley April 10, 2018 at 10:04 AM Very well crafted and exhibiting the natural desire for Spring's arrival. I have never written in this form but you did it so wondrously well my friend!!! A fav... Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2018 at 11:43 AM - Many thanks for friendly visits, a fav. and lovely comment Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Gentry April 7, 2018 at 1:18 AM I like this form! A beautiful descriptive write. Good luck in contest. Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2018 at 4:01 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock April 2, 2018 at 4:21 PM Makes me wish spring was here to smell those flowers. Lovely poem. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2018 at 1:08 AM - Here is spring one day and winter the next day, dear Phyllis :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi April 1, 2018 at 2:14 PM A beautiful Etheree although backwards. One of my favorite forms that you created so beautifully. i'm a fan! Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2018 at 2:52 PM - Many thanks for your comment, appreciate it highly Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

FJ Thomas April 1, 2018 at 10:47 AM Your beautiful words are always so brightening dear soster :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2018 at 11:42 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Søster :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wayne Riley April 1, 2018 at 7:25 AM beautifully written. a great poet. x Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2018 at 8:05 AM - Many thanks Wayne, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman April 1, 2018 at 7:15 AM Spring is coming Anne-Lise. The buttercups are blooming. Lovely poem. Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2018 at 8:05 AM - James, many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine George March 31, 2018 at 5:48 PM Beautiful verse capturing spring in all its glory. Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2018 at 8:04 AM - Many thanks for your visit and friendly comment, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy March 31, 2018 at 12:34 PM Lovely piece, Anne-Lise! Janice Anne-Lise Andresen March 31, 2018 at 12:38 PM Many thanks for your visit and comment, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus March 31, 2018 at 8:05 AM The arrival of spring can be felt and seen, Anne-Lise! May you enjoy spring with all its beauty! ~ May I also wish you a very Happy Easter! Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen March 31, 2018 at 12:38 PM - Delicious with some brighter days ... winter has been long, Paul - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 30, 2018 at 2:02 PM you melt my heart with this remarkable work, anne... is it spring there finally?... happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2018 at 2:06 PM - No, Nette ... have to wait a month - In April / May, spring will come :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan March 30, 2018 at 11:08 AM Wonderful Anne... Beautiful title! Enjoyed it... Thanks for sharing... Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2018 at 11:14 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bette Bavington March 29, 2018 at 3:43 PM Hello. Sunshine Smile. This is a fantastic visual of a coming spring. I hope you have a great Easter. Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2018 at 8:12 AM - Many thanks Bette, for your visit and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu March 29, 2018 at 1:31 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, this poem is beautifully written. have a nice day my friend. Happy Easter. Hugs.Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu March 29, 2018 at 8:26 PM Same to you my friend.Darlene Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2018 at 3:17 PM - All my love and thanks to you, Darlene :) - Happy Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith March 29, 2018 at 12:40 PM Such lovely imagery and interesting style Anne-Lise, best wishes in the contest... Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2018 at 3:15 PM - Thank you for never letting me down, Charlie :) - Thanks a million :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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