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When the Smoke Clears



The fog of war
is lingering long on 
these golden amber grain shores

In the bar,
in the synagogue

Count the missing fingers
in the high school cafeteria tomb
Tally the tiny toe tags
in the elementary home room

Feel another barrel blast
of rage eject empty
When the smoke clears,
wait nervously
for the next automatic weaponry
to fire breathe

Such is life in America:
Wealthy home of the brave,
beggarly land of the free

Daily tourniquets of death
is profit united 
by the paid gun lobby

The deadly fog rolls along
the bloody asphalt
Eighteen wheels of chance
be always spinning roulette wild
Six shooter spitting triple digit proof
is a tempered slag romance

Chambers of commerce
tout the tourist numbers out loud
As the government buries each 
gun violence study 
under a redacted ink cloud

In the open concert air,
in the closed-eye praying 
cathedral pew ... lead eulogies ain’t nothing new

Register those concealed mute ears
and deaf tongues,
which don’t security speak or hear

See how caliber turned blind eyes
have their moral vision 
bank deposit casualties disappear

Shell-shocked citizens fear 
another magazine blast of rage 
is about to eject soul empty
When the smoke clears,
we wait anxiously
for the next impotent badge response
to publicly seethe

Such is statistical life in America,
where bullet violence is purchased so easy:
Bazaar home of the hot metal slave,
wretched land of the cold trigger squeeze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 8:35 PM
Are we ever going to learn? I mean EVER? This makes so much sense to me, since we have drills on a regular basis in my grade school "in case" which to me is horrible! Nicely penned, Freddie. Great Job!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 3:57 PM
So apt in your imagery! I know we all think about it all the time! My nephew’s school had a warning not long ago.
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