Richard Lamoureux Poet Pantoum

When the Pieces Fit

Sometimes the pieces fit so well together
It's almost impossible to see the seams
for me sweetie, you are the perfect fit
Before the beginning we were meant to be

It's almost impossible to see the seams
Just being with you has fixed all my cracks
I truly feel you have made me more complete
For me sweetie, you are the perfect fit

Just being with you has fixed all my cracks
Our days together have calmed my spirit
I have found a place of rest within your embrace
I truly feel you have made me more complete

Our days together have calmed my spirit
I am no longer afraid of my dreaming
You have shown me that dreams really  do come true
I have found a place of rest within your embrace

I am no longer afraid of my dreaming
Before the beginning we were meant to be
You have shown me that dreams really do come true
Sometimes the pieces fit so well together!


Merry Christmas Sweetie, you have gifted me a life beyond my best imaginings.

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Sarban Bhattacharya September 15, 2016 at 4:47 AM I feel how you are blessed with your love, Richard. Nicely penned. Richard Lamoureux September 15, 2016 at 9:05 AM Thanks Sarban, I am very thankful.

Timothy Hicks February 17, 2016 at 1:04 AM How beautiful the thought that the seams can hardly be seen, and to think that sometimes, things really do turn out just so, like in the stories. But the best stories are the one's that you're living in --- perhaps this is the case for you. Richard Lamoureux February 17, 2016 at 8:12 AM Good morning Tim. Thanks for reading one of my last years pieces.

Sara Kendrick January 1, 2016 at 12:24 PM Romantic..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for stopping by..May this be the best year of your life up to this point and may each year that follows only get better..Sara Richard Lamoureux February 17, 2016 at 8:12 AM Thanks for the lovely wish. Sorry I somehow missed this one.

Andrea Dietrich December 25, 2015 at 4:32 PM how beautiful this is, Richard. A merry Christmas to you and yours. Richard Lamoureux December 29, 2015 at 12:37 PM I hope you had a great one! Happy new year.

Mama Bear December 23, 2015 at 10:50 PM Lovely thoughts of Mary May you both have a Merry Christmas Love Mom Richard Lamoureux December 24, 2015 at 7:30 AM I miss you mom, I hope you all have a wonderful Christmas as well. You will be in my thoughts. Love Rick.

Chris Boskovski December 23, 2015 at 11:36 AM Hey Richard, Great write, so much truth in this well written piece of beauty. I love it. Great write Richard. Richard Lamoureux December 23, 2015 at 12:19 PM Thanks Chris, a very Merry Christmas to you and your family.

Eileen Manassian December 23, 2015 at 11:30 AM I'm so happy that you are truly loved and appreciated, Richard. I know you always say how blessed you are....as this poem so testifies, but I believe Mary is also blessed. Many more years of happiness and love to you both. Such an exquisite piece....beautiful.... Richard Lamoureux December 23, 2015 at 12:20 PM You are so thoughtful, I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem. Hugs Rick.

Maurice Yvonne December 23, 2015 at 9:17 AM First and foremost this is a romantic fav for me. Great job on your Pantoum. Great poetry my friend. Richard Lamoureux December 23, 2015 at 9:50 AM I messed with the form a bit but I like the overall effect. Thanks for the visit and for the positive comment.

Lin Lane December 23, 2015 at 9:06 AM Oh my.. this is just great, Richard. I'm going to have to try this form. Thanks for sharing this lovely pantoum. Richard Lamoureux December 23, 2015 at 9:53 AM Thanks Lin Lane, I broke from form so if you check the rules reading this one may confuse you a bit.