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When the Pieces Fit

Sometimes the pieces fit so well together It's almost impossible to see the seams for me sweetie, you are the perfect fit Before the beginning we were meant to be It's almost impossible to see the seams Just being with you has fixed all my cracks I truly feel you have made me more complete For me sweetie, you are the perfect fit Just being with you has fixed all my cracks Our days together have calmed my spirit I have found a place of rest within your embrace I truly feel you have made me more complete Our days together have calmed my spirit I am no longer afraid of my dreaming You have shown me that dreams really do come true I have found a place of rest within your embrace I am no longer afraid of my dreaming Before the beginning we were meant to be You have shown me that dreams really do come true Sometimes the pieces fit so well together! Merry Christmas Sweetie, you have gifted me a life beyond my best imaginings.

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Date: 9/15/2016 4:47:00 AM
I feel how you are blessed with your love, Richard. Nicely penned.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thanks Sarban, I am very thankful.
Date: 2/17/2016 1:04:00 AM
How beautiful the thought that the seams can hardly be seen, and to think that sometimes, things really do turn out just so, like in the stories. But the best stories are the one's that you're living in --- perhaps this is the case for you.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/17/2016 8:12:00 AM
Good morning Tim. Thanks for reading one of my last years pieces.
Date: 1/1/2016 12:24:00 PM
Romantic..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for stopping by..May this be the best year of your life up to this point and may each year that follows only get better..Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/17/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely wish. Sorry I somehow missed this one.
Date: 12/25/2015 4:32:00 PM
how beautiful this is, Richard. A merry Christmas to you and yours.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/29/2015 12:37:00 PM
I hope you had a great one! Happy new year.
Date: 12/23/2015 10:50:00 PM
Lovely thoughts of Mary May you both have a Merry Christmas Love Mom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/24/2015 7:30:00 AM
I miss you mom, I hope you all have a wonderful Christmas as well. You will be in my thoughts. Love Rick.
Date: 12/23/2015 11:36:00 AM
Hey Richard, Great write, so much truth in this well written piece of beauty. I love it. Great write Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/23/2015 12:19:00 PM
Thanks Chris, a very Merry Christmas to you and your family.
Date: 12/23/2015 11:30:00 AM
I'm so happy that you are truly loved and appreciated, Richard. I know you always say how blessed you are....as this poem so testifies, but I believe Mary is also blessed. Many more years of happiness and love to you both. Such an exquisite piece....beautiful....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/23/2015 12:20:00 PM
You are so thoughtful, I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem. Hugs Rick.
Date: 12/23/2015 9:17:00 AM
First and foremost this is a romantic fav for me. Great job on your Pantoum. Great poetry my friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/23/2015 9:50:00 AM
I messed with the form a bit but I like the overall effect. Thanks for the visit and for the positive comment.
Date: 12/23/2015 9:06:00 AM
Oh my.. this is just great, Richard. I'm going to have to try this form. Thanks for sharing this lovely pantoum.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/23/2015 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Lin Lane, I broke from form so if you check the rules reading this one may confuse you a bit.

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