When the ocean rises

Ocean rises with each deep breath exhaling mist

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/25/2024 11:03:00 AM

Ooh…great imagery, Karen!

Karen Croft
Date: 9/25/2024 12:09:00 PM

Thank you!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/25/2024 10:49:00 AM

Dear Karen, You monoku speaks more volumes than many longer poems. Very well written and expressed. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Karen Croft
Date: 9/25/2024 12:10:00 PM

Thank you friend. I like to write haiku and senryu and Monoku that get to the point!

Tom Woody

Date: 9/25/2024 6:39:00 AM

A pretty sight to behold. I've seen it. Nice mono

Karen Croft
Date: 9/25/2024 8:03:00 AM

Thank you!

Daisy Meadows

Date: 9/25/2024 2:17:00 AM

Beautiful!

Karen Croft
Date: 9/25/2024 8:03:00 AM

Thank you!