When the Light Leaves Me

Many times I’ve been around the world
resided in wondrous melic lands,
seen the beauty of diverse faces
muse at issues penned from poetic hands.

Yet! It was if written ironically
payment indeed for the good time,
a sentence one of sensitivity
an impediment in its prime.

A foreboding an inner fear
one immersed in utter confusion,
as the greyness festers within
drives one into self seclusion.

As I reminisce here behind this screen
that I once was a mighty mighty man,
although a shadow afraid of the dark
from here the poets that I love I scan.

So the creeping darkness draws forth
like clouds that mischievously roll in,
one is shackled to the proverbial
Oh God! Reliant upon one’s kin.

Alas as life becomes a faded love affair
and silhouettes haunt a torture soul,
I wince here with in my shyness
now a human being no longer whole!

© Harry J Horsman 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/9/2013 11:49:00 PM
Harry, I'm so moved by this write...so touched. I read your work and I've moved. Pain is no respecter of gender or age...I know, for I've experienced it. We don't have to be alone...read the poems, revel in them...reach out. We need you just as you need us! Hugs!
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Date: 9/19/2012 10:23:00 PM
great poem/ words ,,,, you have a blessed day Harry ;}
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Date: 9/19/2012 6:30:00 AM
a heart-touching poem
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Date: 9/17/2012 10:52:00 AM
A write that touched us all... I hope it isn't the truth of your existance, but if it is... you still have your mind and pen...
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Date: 9/12/2012 4:54:00 PM
Whole and with light enough to write this fine poem, Harry. Thanks for reading my stuff so kindly. Love, daver
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Date: 9/12/2012 4:22:00 PM
time by it does slip, and the grey gets a grip, till we just seem to dawdle, not dance, overcoat is worn out, old body don't prance, an we live in the shadow of doubt, tear ya arms off he said, 30 year old Fred, so i went into a Magpie smother, it's "war" thinking me, Marquis of Queensbury, right cross and he fell like the dead, Beware of the old an undead:) the venom of antiquity... re: Harry Horseman " When the Light Leaves Me" Don
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Date: 9/11/2012 11:01:00 PM
When one strength wearies we must resolve to construct a new temple of strength upon the old's foundation - on a death another life, or quality may spring - I respect the honest self examination you present here as you approach an incipient epoch Harry - J.A.B. %
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Date: 9/11/2012 9:39:00 AM
It's a genius poem, your inner excellency, reality is adorned. Thanks my friend for your lovely comment on my write. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/11/2012 4:29:00 AM
hey harry, this is such a moving, poignant poem, and, judging by the comments, it seems a lot of people can relate to your words; I think we all have times when 'the light leaves us', in one way or another...don't think I ever thanked you for my win in your 5 W's contest! I'm hopelessly behind with my commenting at the moment! :-) charlotte
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Date: 9/11/2012 4:29:00 AM
This is indeed an excellent write, Harry! I love it and I have enjoyed reading it today. Have a nice day always!!!! hugs:) leonora
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Date: 9/10/2012 9:52:00 PM
Harry reading the comments of others here, I see you struck a deep chord in many of them. I think those of us "older" ones really get this. I am with SHerry here, in my eyes too you are always a mighty man!! (awesome writing, my friend).
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Date: 9/10/2012 8:30:00 PM
Harry, an interesting take you give,,, an honor to reach out for words through your poem... your poem, appealed very deep. thanks...pd
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Date: 9/10/2012 8:13:00 PM
Harry; this is so sad, but so good and well written. In the eyes of God we will always be whole. Many blessings to you. Lucilla
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Date: 9/10/2012 5:23:00 PM
You have pierced my soul with this introspective write, harry! As the greyness festers within drives one into self seclusion...when I feel the grey, I, too, seclude myself. The only cure is getting out and feeling light on my face. Only then do I feel whole, small but whole. We are all so different and so much the same. Hugs to you always, Rhonda
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Date: 9/10/2012 2:44:00 PM
And as time's light shines evermore. We sit and wait and ask what for. The shades of grey bestill the soul. When love shines through, that's when we're whole.
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Date: 9/10/2012 10:58:00 AM
wonderfully written friend Harry..like it..you're such a great poet..thanks for sharing..
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Date: 9/10/2012 8:16:00 AM
Like this harry but it is sad too sad I think. I always love you r rhyming ones they show a different side to you xx soup
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Date: 9/10/2012 8:05:00 AM
good one,very nicely written
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