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Note: My sister, Linda, died on Tuesday, June 18, 2024. I did not get to see her before she died. This poem was written the night before she died. I did not know she was so near to passing away when I wrote this poem. I was projecting my wishes to see her, but this did not happen as hoped. . I know she is now at peace with the Lord. 

The afternoon sunlight is waning, casting a soft glow inside her small bedroom. I sit beside her bed, a witness to her slow suffering. Ravaged by illness, she is restless and uncomfortable. I try to offer an encouraging word as I hold her frail hand. We used to sing together. Music was her world. She lets me softly sing a favorite childhood song. I hate that the dreaded cancer is slowly taking her away… small lark fades on perch where songs were sung so freely now hushed in silence I gently wipe her brow and stroke her hair. She looks so small between the sheets. She is listless and has no appetite. She knows it won’t be long. I remember our many happy times together growing up. Now, I pray over her, asking for God’s mercy. Tears trickle down my cheeks. Soon, my little sister will be with her Savior… wounded lark struggles quiet pleas are heard above never more to sing

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Date: 9/26/2024 1:33:00 PM
Wow! This says much. Sorry for your loss, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/26/2024 7:03:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. It’s still a bit surreal to me. I’m grateful she is now with the Lord.
Date: 8/1/2024 2:20:00 AM
I can sympathize with you for not being near your sister. I know the feeling. When my wife was taken to hospital, I was not allowed to be near her. When I arrived she was dead. I never got over her loss.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/5/2024 9:57:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your experience, Victor. I’m sorry you were not able to see your wife before she died. There is a true sense of loss in that. I appreciate you stopping by to read my poem. God bless you!
Date: 7/30/2024 6:49:00 AM
Laura, this is the first of your poems that I have read. It is so powerful and beautiful. I also lost sisters to cancer and know how devastating it can be. Your love is so evident in this beautifully written tribute to her. God bless you and your family.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/31/2024 1:55:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and for your kind condolences, Chula. God bless you!
Date: 7/20/2024 12:08:00 AM
Hello Laura. This poem made me cry as your beautiful love for your sister remains forever true. I lost my mom to cancer...Today she would be 81. My condolences to you and your family. Her soul now rests in Jesus's arms. Blessings to you. Chantelle
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/20/2024 3:23:00 PM
Thank you for your kind condolences, Chantelle. My sister’s passing was all so sudden, being diagnosed in March and dying in June. Makes me cherish every day even more with loved ones. God bless you!
Date: 7/17/2024 3:33:00 PM
Hi Laura, after reading when summer has gone I read this poem and it truly touched me , my heart goes out to you and your loved ones , it left me with tears in my eyes , it is such a sad heartfelt poem written with such emotion. Danny
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/20/2024 3:27:00 PM
Thank you, Danny, for commenting. It’s hard to believe my sister is gone…and I cherish the memories now..
Date: 7/13/2024 7:50:00 PM
So sorry Laura, your prophetic writing is inspirational
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/15/2024 1:45:00 PM
Thank you, Craig. I appreciate your kind words and stopping by. :)
Date: 7/13/2024 5:33:00 AM
My deepest condolences on your loss, Your poignant poem shows the sorrow felt when we see loved ones suffering...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/15/2024 1:46:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Joseph. I appreciate it. :)
Date: 6/27/2024 5:55:00 AM
Just back for a reread. Hope you're ok. If you need to chat...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/27/2024 6:16:00 AM
I’m doing okay..thank you, Tom.
Date: 6/18/2024 4:50:00 AM
Is this a true story Laura? Either way it's terribly sad. My middle sister died at fifty and my mom passed in November and dad died last month. Still, we have this hope - Acts 24:15. Awesome haibun
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/18/2024 3:37:00 PM
I'm really sorry. I hope you connect dear Laura. Ironically, that middle sister of mine refused to see me before she died. What can one do?
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/18/2024 7:05:00 AM
I am so sorry for your losses, Tom. My sister was recently diagnosed with advanced ovarian cancer and is doing poorly. We live far apart from each other and she has not wanted me to visit yet (we have a complicated relationship) but I hope to see her soon, as time is running out. My poem is a projection of what I imagine…Thanks for stopping by, Tom.

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