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When the Inside Dies-Cl

A wayside plant nobody cared, bloomed a forlorn flower in spring. In glint of petals your face flared, like motif on butterfly wing. At the edge of instinct luring, lancet of desire I’d unbared, plucked the flower on joyful swing, it saw my inside die unspared.
January 27, 2020 Syllable count : 8 each line Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : Oh-No A Twisted Char-Lay Sponsor : Charles Messina

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Date: 2/16/2020 6:37:00 PM
Subimal, I love the line "like motif on butterfly wing". Congrats on your win in Charlie's contest ~ John
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Date: 2/16/2020 2:15:00 PM
A wonderful but kind of sad write, Subimal. Well done. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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