When the Flowers of Youth Fell

When the Flowers of Youth Fell

Winter stayed late that year
courting Spring with a fury.
Beautiful gifts of snow
and dazzling ice, he gave her.
It was during such courtship
I found myself lost -- adrift
in a place that once was ....
decades from this century.

Where mud and blood held hands
beneath duty and honour
and kindred flowers fell
to sounds of bugle and drum.

Smoke arose through Spring's tears.
Images of Blue and Grey
pilfered my breath as cannons 
rained thunder upon the brave.

How was this happening?
This was not where I belonged!
My time was not this place
and I wanted to go home.
Where Winter courted Spring
and snowmen fell -- not flowers --
upon the muddy ground
as snow reigned upon the brave.

The smell of gun powder
danced about my head and nose
like spirits for the faint --
arousing life ... far from home. 
"Get down! Get down! Get down!"
The half-crazed voice plunged me 
into the mud and blood
and I lay frozen in fear
beneath his weight ... and the cold. 
So cold, no hearts were beating, 
no breaths were being drawn, 
just the smell of sweat and blood.
The smell of rain and death.

Clutched tightly in his pale fist 
a tattered blood-stained note
bore the words, "Please ... for
mama ...."      
I tried but could not scream. 
And, I felt daylight passing ....

As shadows took the brave,
Winter's folly tamed sweet Spring
with final coats of snow ....
and snowmen fell -- not flowers. 

©deborah burch
3.08.2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ajmal Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 10:05 AM
A really beautiful poem, I truly don t have words for it, you ve explained everything beautifully and everything about this poem was perfect, continue to write beautiful poems like this
Breedt Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 6:35 AM
Deborah this is a remarkable piece. How fiendishly clever to use flowers and muddy trenches and when you fell , we fell with you and saw the blood stained note. From a womens world of flowers to a mans domain is exceptional. A mix of the present and history with such emotive content is rare.
Pekrul Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 4:28 PM
HEAVY! This drew me in after the first stanza.
Burch Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 4:46 PM
:) thank you David. You're very kind. Hugggs.
Roberts Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 10:50 PM
WOW
Burch Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 4:46 PM
Thank you Donna:) hugs. deb
Kroll Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 7:35 AM
I love this poem. You did take me back so that I could smell and hear the grimness of war. Well done! Kathy
Burch Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 4:45 PM
Thank you Kathleen!! I appreciate your kindness!! Big Hugggs. Deb
Beaufort Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 4:18 PM
A beautiful sentiment and story. We only hope that people will learn from the past.
Burch Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 4:44 PM
Thank you Duke!! Wouldn't it be nice if they did. Hugggs. Deb
Posey Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 6:16 PM
And the rain wets both blue and gray - who live to fight another day - If thunder o'er the cannon roar - can it mean the war is o'er..... This is a great post and you are to be congratulated.... Jake
Sirak Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:55 AM
Beautiful, mesmerizing. A well deserved win
A   Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 9:48 PM
Deborah, Congratulations with your awesome winning free verse poem... xox~ LINDA
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 4:04 PM
Elements used in your poem made it extraordinary. Filled with visual descriptions that let me enter your dramatic penned words and held me there. Deborah a BIG congratulation on your well deserved 1st place win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Ryerson Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 4:17 AM
I was sucked in and mesmerized after the first line...Stunning and eloquently written...How you do dat? - Toby
Ryerson Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 4:21 AM
'Where mud and blood held hands'...Mercy me
Richards Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 7:10 PM
This is wonderful...well deserved win!!!! Congratulations, Deborah!
May Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 9:22 PM
awesome write...congrats on your win
Macmillan Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 8:49 PM
HEY! This is well deserving of its top honours. THIS IS FANTASTIC. Congrats, hon, this is one that merits publication, somewhere! Its voice is so strong, its repetition BANG on and the cuts exactly were they should be... art! So glad I read this! Hugs, Cyndi
Omara Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 8:00 PM
How appropriate this fine poem should win on your memorial day weekend. Congratulations, Deborah.-Red
Guzzi Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:28 PM
BIG Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:24 PM
Deborah congratulation on your well deserve win. This is an exceptional and heartfelt poem. Warm Smiles, Connie
Morrison Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:11 PM
Beautiful Poem! Deborah Congrats on the win thanks for submitting to my contest. Please do so again. Kim
Duncan Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 11:25 PM
Love , love , love this write, reminds me of North and South/ Patrice Swayze. fav's ;}
Guzzi Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 6:40 PM
ahh you put it here..fret..now it is published..Light & Love
Komala Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 10:54 PM
awesome write... enjoyed so very much...thank you dearest Deborah for sharing your charming poem <3 Sk
Posey Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 5:49 PM
This is but one more reason I am reluctant to try writing free verse. You set the standard alarmingly high. I thoroughly am in awe of talent like yours.... Fantastic!! to my favs Please don't laugh at my meager offerings..... Jake
Hunter Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 1:48 PM
This is crazy good.....I will have to fave it
Horne Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 2:46 PM
powerful write, my friend. Congrats on your wins : )
A   Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 8:08 PM
thank you for drawing me in with the first gripping image of a long winter stay... however, glad the flowers, will enjoy the spring... as I will...xox~ Linda
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