When the Fan Falls

The steady metallic hum stops,
while working with focus,
After a second of silence, 
then the world shifts.

Metallic fan rained down,
On my safe space of the working table,
Fear grips my chest, thinking about
Had it fallen when I was right below?

Papers fly, My laptop, my soul was touched, 
My focus on work was scattered.
Helpless, I watch shockingly. 

The crash shakes my bones,
echoes in my skull.
I can't move. Quiet follows,
heavy and thick.
My breath caught.

People rush in,
voices blur together.
I'm alone in the chaos.

Staring at the fallen ceiling fan,
I feel small and fragile.
Life feels short.

My hands shake,
tears threaten.
I'm alive but changed.

Each breath is a gift.
My heart races with gratitude,
and lingering fear.

I look at the mess of the accumulated black dust,
The fan had shed on my office table,
Oh! at my second chance.
Words will come,
but now, I feel.

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Date: 8/12/2024 11:11:00 AM
I am glad you survived unscathed. I also worry about ceiling fan in our earthquake territorial domain. I keep a light free standing fan which can not hurt anyone. Thanks for insight,
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Date: 8/12/2024 6:52:00 PM
Thanks Sir
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Dr. Padmashree R P
Date: 8/12/2024 6:51:00 PM
Oh. Words are limited for expressing the experience Jay Sir. Anyways, I learnt that I am fearless and strong enough to withstand a bomb kind of experience just a few centimetres next to my hand and laptop.
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