When the Earth Was In Danger 5

When the Earth was in danger     5 /8

Prelude   (For Prelude please see part 1 )


Watching the changing season all around, to enchant the dance of Urvashi*, 
The Earth began to dance too, thinking that Urvashi’s* dance would save the earth,
What a splendid scene it was, which was spreading a magic everywhere on earth,
No one had ever witnessed this beauty and grandeur, 
Neither anywhere in the heaven,   nor anywhere even on earth.

Breathless and motionless they were watching only, 
Under the influence of intoxication, produced by the seasons Goddess Spring,
The last efforts of Urvashi,* to save the earth and all its beautiful creatures. 19

Suddenly a shocking incident took place, shattering the hopes of everyone,
While dancing with Lord Shiva, pride entered into the mind of Urvashi*,
She began to think that she was performing her dance, 
as good as that of Lord Shiva*, and
This thought began to disturb her mind, 
disturbing the coolness of her flawless dance. 20

Watching the seed of pride, sprouted in the mind of Urvashi*.
The Goddess Earth, ‘Dhara’* thought, “Now the destruction is inevitable,”
If not stopped immediately, the seed of pride rising high in Urvashi’s mind,
Could become the cause of Shiva’s rage and the destruction of our Earth and the Universe.

Not only she too would burnt alive in the cosmic heat of Shiva’s third eye*, but 
The whole of this beautiful Earth and the wonderful Universe too would be,
In flames of that cosmic heat and life from this most beautiful planet,
Would vanish forever and forever. 21

A sudden incident took place in that moment, which disturbed the balance of Urvashi,
Urvashi* fell on the ground, while she was at the peak of her divine dance,
Her dance came to a abrupt halt and with that even Shiva’s Tandava* stopped too,
Lord Shiva opened his eyes to see,
What had happened, which forced him to stop his dance suddenly.

Ravindra
Kanpur India 24th Feb. 2011					to continue in 6

Clarifications

Urvashi*  was one of the most beautiful Apsara of the court of Lord Indira of heaven, as
per Hindu mythology. She was a perfect dancer and singer. 

Lord Shiva* is the supreme God of Hindus.

*Tandava Nritya* means Dance of destruction.

Dahra*Hindi word  means earth.

Trinetra*  means The Third Eye of Lord Shiva or which exists in the center of our forehead

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Date: 3/5/2011 9:52:00 PM
Oh, wow, this one we call a "cliff hanger" YOu left us hanging wondering what has happened next!! Hey, I want to know. Do you make all this up ? or are these already known legends of your people that you have put to poetry? as always, great description, Ravindra.
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:37:00 AM
Oh my, Ravindra, Pride invaded Uvashi's heart and all the effort that went into her dance to save earth may have been in vain. Perhaps Lord Shiva will show mercy! Looking forward to the conclusion in part 7. I am out of town until Wednesday, but wanted to say hi. Love you and your poetry, Carolyn
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Date: 2/24/2011 1:43:00 PM
thankxx Ravindra my friend for writing this lovely series of poetry which am so enjoying with great intensity ... appreciate your blog comment and please send me your remedy for vision per your culture to my yahoo e mail... petitepoetess@yahoo.com and we can discuss further my friend... thankxx so very much for your many kind comments on my work.. as we enjoy each others writings so very much.. appreciate your friendship, concern and luv...
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Date: 2/23/2011 7:08:00 PM
The story is now in the most exciting phase if its conclusion due to entering of pride in the mind of Urvashi. Sprouting of pride always leads towards downfall is the theme of this part. With best wishes and love .......Ravindra
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