Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Sonnet

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- When the Angel of Death Comes -

You brought armfuls of dream
Want to parse the stream
They say you are made of cream
Bright and leading my tongue scream

What else was so sweet
This is your cross street
Always stand on its own feet
No matter how much the clock beat

Uncultured and out of control cars
Foolish drive from hours at the bars
Received license from the planet Mars
No wonder purple stars

Without you in my life my friend
Visiting hours are over ~ the end



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28.10.2015 
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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3rd place in the contest

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Paul Callus March 4, 2019 at 7:46 AM A unique take, I must say, Anne-Lise! I can feel the contrast between the initial light lines and the sad ending. That cross is excellent! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2019 at 7:55 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith March 4, 2019 at 2:02 AM Congrats Anne-Lise, a sad but touching write. :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2019 at 4:05 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison March 3, 2019 at 5:27 PM such a touching sonnet Anne-lise, there are some who should never be allowed behind the steering wheel:-( hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2019 at 11:45 PM - Yes, we see them every day - And all those who sit with mobile phone in hand ... scary - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire March 3, 2019 at 1:35 PM The message about bad driving comes through clearly, Sunshine. There are often times I wonder how (and where) some people got their licenses. Maybe these licenses did come from Mars! With many outstanding entries, judging was difficult (again). Congratulations on your win! And thank you for supporting the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2019 at 2:10 PM - Many thanks for my place on your winning list, dear Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lindsay Laurie December 23, 2015 at 8:18 PM G'day Anne Lise... a very sad state of affairs Anne Lise. The angel of death hovers over us all and strikes when least expected - Lindsay Anne-Lise Andresen December 25, 2015 at 6:39 AM - Lindsay, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman November 14, 2015 at 8:28 AM Hello Dear Anne-Lise, A very powerful and sad sonnet with its words of earthly disregard culminating in a tragic auto accident (if I've interpreted this correctly). Regardless, what a tragic and terrible way to go. A poignant and moving write. A Giant "SEVEN" too!! Cheers and Best, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2015 at 1:58 PM - Careless and thoughtless ...... one second life is over - sad! - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comment, dear friend Gary - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort November 11, 2015 at 1:11 PM Interesting take on departure. Sounds like there was a car accident. If that is the case, it's a sad way to travel away. Anne-Lise Andresen November 11, 2015 at 2:05 PM - You interpreted it right, dear friend Duke - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie November 5, 2015 at 3:17 PM now that was something right there....so many commit dastardly deeds without care....so it is up to us to be aware....otherwise, there is so much more pain we will bear....great as always anne....;) Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2015 at 12:36 PM - Eric, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen November 2, 2015 at 4:56 PM Wow! What a very great write here. sincerely Anne, I love the flow of your excellent piece and the last line is extreme strong. Brilliant one.............A.M. Anne-Lise Andresen November 3, 2015 at 3:23 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 1, 2015 at 2:41 PM all saints' day wishes, anne... happy sunday!.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen November 3, 2015 at 3:23 AM - Nette, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid October 31, 2015 at 11:39 AM deeply touching beautiful pen anne lise wishing you a blessed weekend filled with smiles dear pal Anne-Lise Andresen November 3, 2015 at 3:23 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven October 31, 2015 at 10:19 AM A touching write Anne-Lise. I like how you have written this as a sonnet, and I applaud your purple stars. Oh and thank you for your weekend well wishes. I'm on night duties, but so far my weekend is proving to be a good one. Anne-Lise Andresen November 3, 2015 at 3:22 AM - Scott, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman October 29, 2015 at 5:24 PM wow seems so long ago since a visit to your lovely poems,love this Anne Lise,, like the flowers that keep on blooming,, so does your wonderful poetry... Anne-Lise Andresen November 3, 2015 at 3:22 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen October 29, 2015 at 3:39 PM Quiet long friend, your write is as brilliant as always. I love how you conveyed this,and the last line seem voluptuous. Excellent........A.M. Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2015 at 5:01 AM - Afolabi, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith October 28, 2015 at 11:37 PM So strong the last two lines....touching Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2015 at 5:01 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 28, 2015 at 9:20 PM beautiful Anne and reflects your heart..sad also... hugsxxx~Olive Eloisa =`) Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2015 at 5:00 AM - Olive, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud October 28, 2015 at 7:06 PM tencerly sad.. so beautiful, anne.. you have a gold heart.. happy day..was out of the country, so i'm just commenting now.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2015 at 5:00 AM - Nette, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez October 28, 2015 at 3:57 PM A touching write, Anne-Lise. I hope you are keeping well. hugs! Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2015 at 5:15 PM - Thanks for visiting and comments dear Kim:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter October 28, 2015 at 2:50 PM Very sad sentiments in this heartfelt Sonnet Anne Lise. Sending you love and prayers my very dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:) Hugs! D. Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2015 at 3:27 PM - Thanks for visiting and comments on my poem today, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian October 28, 2015 at 10:55 AM Oh...those last two lines are so so sad, my Sunshine. This sonnet is full of feelings. I wrote a poem for you a few days ago...Hoped you'd visit. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2015 at 1:45 PM - I am sorry .... I have not seen it :( - But, thank you for your visit on my poem today ... always a pleasure to see you, dear friend Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis October 28, 2015 at 9:00 AM The sadness from your heart I wish to chase away and leave only joy to reign! Beautiful sentimental poem, my friend, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2015 at 1:59 PM - Life is about sorrow and joys - Thanks for visiting and comments on my poem today, dear friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 28, 2015 at 8:05 AM Subtly beautiful Anne Lise! I hv missed you for quite sometime! Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2015 at 1:51 PM - There are so many I miss here ...... "give and receive" is said ..... however, many who "only" receive - Thanks for visiting and comments, Dr. Upma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)