When Tender Love Speaks

How kindled sighs of ardor’s enraged fire Relieve my breath from time’s listless disdain, For my language with a hidden desire Slips through your mouth , in phrases, let them rain; To taste fondness’ grace again and again. Oh, speak of lyrics these eyes may not know And let them not fall in vain, not in vain! Wondering, thinking if I should turn and flee; Frozen on this bright spot, I rub my eyes. For there before me, yes to my surprise, Is your rare evening glance, a night’s decree Of the magic, this heart need not foresee Until love song enthralls to take me high Into your wide arms , a bliss ever free! Your Favorite Poem Written in February for Laura Loo Re-submitted 2/26/2018

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Date: 5/15/2018 8:45:00 AM
Just wow, Nette! Your words, like magic carpets, take me to the place you so artistically describe. Oh what a glorious ride. My pulsing heart offers a thousand whispered thank-you's!
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Date: 2/27/2018 8:00:00 PM
Beautifully expressed in lovely imagery, rhythm and rhyme Nette Congratulations on your wonderful win..
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Date: 2/27/2018 7:52:00 AM
Very romantic, nette. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Date: 2/27/2018 5:44:00 AM
Sweet Nette! Loved the rhyme scheme, amazing. Beautifully expressed with such fine imagery and outstanding beauty. congrats and thank you :)-luloo
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Date: 2/14/2018 8:58:00 PM
Happy Valentine's Day and congrats. Beautiful poem, Nette.
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Date: 2/13/2018 10:37:00 PM
Hi Nette, You've penned such a beautiful and romantic piece. This is top notch poetry. Congratulations your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/13/2018 10:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place for the beautifully written poem, Nette ...
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Date: 2/13/2018 2:10:00 PM
Lovely poetic lines Nette! Congratulations on your win! ~ Judy
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Date: 2/13/2018 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on this magnificent write!! Hugs eve
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Date: 2/13/2018 3:05:00 AM
- What's more beautiful than a poem of love, Nette :) - Congratulations on your wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/13/2018 1:32:00 AM
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/12/2018 11:24:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette on your first position win
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Date: 2/12/2018 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on ur win :) great write.
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Date: 2/12/2018 6:03:00 PM
Congratulation, Nette
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Date: 2/12/2018 5:35:00 PM
Returning with congrats nette, on your top win!
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Date: 2/12/2018 4:38:00 PM
A poem full of romantic lines Nette, I remember reading this one and thinking what a great poem it was.. Full of great lines, perfect for the contest.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 2/2/2018 11:50:00 AM
- A beautiful, sweet and romantic Valentine poem, Nette :) - Emile's heart will melt ... good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/2/2018 8:16:00 AM
Romance at its highest, Nette:)
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Date: 2/1/2018 9:15:00 PM
such passion expressed like petals slowly opening as its fragrance is inhaled...good luck
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Date: 2/1/2018 4:07:00 PM
What a beautiful romantic poem, Nette, I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck. John
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Date: 2/1/2018 3:08:00 PM
You really have a great way with words nad have scribed some amazing lines here, including the first one that set the scene for the whole poem..
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Date: 2/1/2018 2:42:00 PM
WOW! A rhythmic romantic creation, filled with sweet love..a beautiful poem, nette..best for a win.
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