When Tender Love Speaks

How kindled sighs of ardor’s enraged fire Relieve my breath from time’s listless disdain, For my language with a hidden desire Slips through your mouth , in phrases, let them rain; To taste fondness’ grace again and again. Oh, speak of lyrics these eyes may not know And let them not fall in vain, not in vain! Wondering, thinking if I should turn and flee; Frozen on this bright spot, I rub my eyes. For there before me, yes to my surprise, Is your rare evening glance, a night’s decree Of the magic, this heart need not foresee Until love song enthralls to take me high Into your wide arms , a bliss ever free! Your Favorite Poem Written in February for Laura Loo Re-submitted 2/26/2018
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Man Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Just wow, Nette! Your words, like magic carpets, take me to the place you so artistically describe. Oh what a glorious ride. My pulsing heart offers a thousand whispered thank-you's!
Ashley Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 8:00 PM
Beautifully expressed in lovely imagery, rhythm and rhyme Nette Congratulations on your wonderful win..
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February 27, 2018 at 7:52 AM
Very romantic, nette. Congrats on your most deserving win.
Scars Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Sweet Nette! Loved the rhyme scheme, amazing. Beautifully expressed with such fine imagery and outstanding beauty. congrats and thank you :)-luloo
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February 14, 2018 at 8:58 PM
Happy Valentine's Day and congrats. Beautiful poem, Nette.
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February 13, 2018 at 10:37 PM
Hi Nette, You've penned such a beautiful and romantic piece. This is top notch poetry. Congratulations your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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February 13, 2018 at 10:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place for the beautifully written poem, Nette ...
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February 13, 2018 at 2:10 PM
Lovely poetic lines Nette! Congratulations on your win! ~ Judy
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February 13, 2018 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations on this magnificent write!! Hugs eve
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February 13, 2018 at 3:05 AM
- What's more beautiful than a poem of love, Nette :) - Congratulations on your wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 13, 2018 at 1:32 AM
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Congratulations.
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February 12, 2018 at 11:24 PM
Congratulations, Nette on your first position win
Raynes Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 6:33 PM
Congratulations Nette on ur win :) great write.
Beam Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 6:03 PM
Congratulation, Nette
Pandit Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 5:35 PM
Returning with congrats nette, on your top win!
One Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 4:38 PM
A poem full of romantic lines Nette, I remember reading this one and thinking what a great poem it was.. Full of great lines, perfect for the contest.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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February 2, 2018 at 11:50 AM
- A beautiful, sweet and romantic Valentine poem, Nette :) - Emile's heart will melt ... good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Romance at its highest, Nette:)
Parker Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 9:15 PM
such passion expressed like petals slowly opening as its fragrance is inhaled...good luck
Gondolf Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 4:07 PM
What a beautiful romantic poem, Nette, I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck. John
One Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 3:08 PM
You really have a great way with words nad have scribed some amazing lines here, including the first one that set the scene for the whole poem..
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 2:42 PM
WOW! A rhythmic romantic creation, filled with sweet love..a beautiful poem, nette..best for a win.
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