When Tears Touch Ii a Collab With Olive Eloisa Guillermo

Sitting lax, Speakers on ears: "(You should know better) Dream of better lives the kind which never hate (You should see why) Dropped in the state of imaginary grace (You should know better)... ...I'll stop the world and melt with you You've seen the difference and it's getting better all the time..." Then Immediately it stopped cause... [Fasten your belts please.... In five minutes we will be landing.] --------------------------------------------------------- Back, left and right, I walk and glance to search; More than five feet tall girl with long jet black hair... She said she will be in purple collar dress [With that one in a million glossy awesome smile...] Here there and everywhere, my eyes and feet run 'round Tiger eyes seeking at the sea of crowd on the lounge Picturing a tall fair man with some bluish eyes in her mind. He told her he will be in his khakis and blue sleeves  My heart flutters high as I pass a gaze with each man I see My diaphragm seems to work twice than usual as I spree. Palms began to warm though outside a shower of snowflakes.. My throat gone desert dry as I am excited of the sight... Around are persons saying warm hello's and some are hugging Each one busy on little chitchat at the lobby ground While some are still carrying some of their bags and luggages. As it's worth the wait... worth the solitary wait... My cheeks and nose turning smokey rosy drifts [as there in the left end corner is he} Thunder eyes sparkle a blinding light  [as there in the right corner is she] Wide smile formed in two thin lips showing white teeth Arms and hands on tidal waves as they are running. running. running... Running half-way... Even the ticking clock halts to watch.... Black and blue eyes locked in one steady stare 'till they stopped face to face eyes talking as they shake hands tight eyes and hands together, no one breaking free Seems they are the only ones there  Uncaring the others, all smiles then one moment tears of joy touch   as they embrace...  Soppy eyes converse. Dreaming of better lives  the kind which never hate The kind that never had been blemished by such evil from the world Dropped in the state of imaginary grace Shall never try to be that unkind,  Instead... this heart pumps to unfurl... © Olive Eloisa Guillermo and James Fraser Written November 6, 2014 .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/6/2014 6:30:00 PM
:) thanks much MR. James.. :D I shall not say anymore than being delighted to write poetry with you.. :D
Login to Reply
Fraser Avatar
James Fraser
Date: 11/9/2014 5:41:00 PM
Olive, it's always a joy writing with you. We will write other collab's together in the coming weeks months. Tonight I looked back at my artwork, aged 53, it's another avenue I also need to dedicate time 2. It's been so many years, 1992 to be exact, yet I still have a piece of Art unfinished = lazy me, time to fix. I thank you from my heart for the writes, and the gracious comments, James :)
Date: 11/6/2014 2:43:00 PM
This is awesome guys...I love it....How many have dreamed of this moment...brilliance....love the intro song too....Tim
Login to Reply
Fraser Avatar
James Fraser
Date: 11/9/2014 5:59:00 PM
Olive is certainly the one to have those accolades. For a poet whose language being English is second, she's some girl when it comes to writing. All I can say is thank you, your comments are always appreciated, James :)
Date: 11/6/2014 12:59:00 PM
I was gripped from start to finish and oh when they met - wow - amazing imagery throughout - James and Olive this is sensational! Hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2014 5:58:00 PM
I have the same connection when I write with Darren - with little or no alteration just a pure flow and energy between us. I just hope and pray he will return to us and we will begin writing again when he is well:-) hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
James Fraser
Date: 11/9/2014 5:54:00 PM
An absolute joy writing this with Olive. She is certainly what the Soup needs for today, and tomorrow. Ideas appear to bounce and resonate, when it comes to writing, that's a joy indeed. Thank you kindly Jan..........xxxx
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter