When Tears Touch--A Collab With Olive Eloisa Guillermo

WHEN TEARS TOUCH

The twelfth of November reminds me of the day            
When our paths first crossed then came to grow on trail.             
Soon... all the days like waves rolled into years  
As we reminisce our pasts: joys and tears for fears. 
         
A pad with pen I hold to write what pops by;                    
Each tint and curve a bell that says, you and I.                
The words are mere push and pull medley of thoughts            
Shaping a circle melody of heart shots.
                    
Learnings flower our way as our cultures shared;                 
Gem writings topically crafted are compared.                   
Feelings flood colours to our world, closer we became--          
Creeping longing is "our meeting" as this both our aim           
 
Beep and peek are lace ladders to higher trust grounds          
Every tap and trade a thread fortifying our bond                
The lasso tying our heartstrings to etch some rhymes           
Vital signs checked normal but awhile raise second hands  

Can it be that this a fruit of stardust's grand wand?     
Or a rose waiting to bloom and behold upon bosoms?      

Now the day has arrived, suitcases packed, I smile.        
A journey, I have dreamt about, many many miles.           
Nervousness cocoons but it's normal to feel this;          
For this my long wish as I enter the coming hours.

Distance and differences our silent enemies!              
But... It did not stop us from thinking sound strategies.
Interest and love gleams as our loyal company;
Enabling us to draw verses of harmony.

Broken bridges we cross by grace of felicity~  
Yearning to meet eye-to-eye an intensity
Along the wires we jibe to friendly deal
That as crisp December sings we will make it real.

The cool December made our wanting a tip-top exhilarate..
and from somewhere, a song plays:

"When you feel in your skin in your bones and the hollow 
Of your heart, there's no way you can wait till tomorrow.
When there isn't any doubt about it once you come this close
Cos you know and you know that you know...."


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*** the last stanza are lines taken from the song: "WHEN YOU KNOW" by Shawn Colvin from the movie Serendipity.

© J. A. Fraser and O.E.Guillermo
October 29, 2014; 10:05 pm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/31/2014 9:09:00 AM
This is fabulous you two....hugs and cheers
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James Fraser
Date: 10/31/2014 4:11:00 PM
Thank you Cupids :)
Date: 10/30/2014 8:07:00 PM
James and Olive...What an outstanding beauty.Favouring it"
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James Fraser
Date: 10/31/2014 7:29:00 AM
Thank you kindly Charmaine, and thank you for favouring our poem, much appreciated, James :)
Date: 10/30/2014 7:49:00 PM
Mr. James... Mr. JAmes... :D I'm happy that you post this along to your lists.. I'll be ashamed if you'll not besides the title itself is your idea and I just elaborated it on how i like it to be.. and how we like it to be.. :) it was a pleasure writing this to you and I'm looking forward to another.. :D! Two heads are better than one isn't it? smiles and God bless... olive eloisa.. :D
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James Fraser
Date: 10/31/2014 7:28:00 AM
So many topics and subjects to write about Olive, and we've only just started. A big thank you for being part of the two of us writing, James :)
Date: 10/30/2014 3:49:00 PM
Stunning collaboration James. It is so good to re read this now you have posted it too:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/30/2014 6:08:00 PM
Thank you kindly Jan, very much appreciated, James xx
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