When Tears Dry

eyes- like willow trees; drooped in rain, become mimosas when the pain stops

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/13/2023 10:01:00 AM

Quite an emotional write Charlie. Tom

Tom Woody

Date: 12/13/2023 6:28:00 AM

Pretty one liner Charles

Ink Empress

Date: 12/13/2023 5:46:00 AM

This is such a deeply moving and heartfelt one liner dear charles, i love the depth of what you’ve conveyed here, especially the way you’ve written “ eyes- like willow trees; drooped in rain, “ what a creative simile!! “become mimosas ”!’mimosas sound familiar but i dont remember exactly what it is but it sounds good! Pleasure always reading you. Sending you light always

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/13/2023 5:05:00 AM

Oh my, this is such a profound monoku dear Charles.. The imagery and the depths of emotion are truly so breathtaking here, I love your visualisation of eyes like weeping willows when in pain and then transforming into mimos when the ache stops.. So much creativity reflects in this one! Loved reading it, sending light :)