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When summer is gone

Stories that stood behind soundless shapes; Silence have finally found its way, Dressed in a tall sky of towering tendons, Wishing-wells weeping for wagons, And as fiends of the forest frame fervent flavors, Gruesome gravels aching for a touch of dirt from bittersweet barrels, But one day the festering foe will see , what it means to be on scorching knees, When summer is gone only the snow shall bleed, A sonnet shaper than the dark Lead you read, What good are ammos without the gun it fits to, Perhaps threats are just a view only to sit through, Salt and pepper beard too seek not for fluffy old warm rugs, when your floors were far too cold for your own bugs, You’ve stained the better half of what was meant to be, Then required a fully functioning me? There is no room for light in this foggy page full of grief, For hope is a delicacy garnished for thieves.

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Date: 8/8/2024 2:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner in this contest. Way to go. I was delighted to see your name in the list. Sara K
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Date: 7/30/2024 11:32:00 AM
This was a beautiful poem to read. Loved the metaphors, especially the dirt...
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Date: 7/27/2024 1:22:00 PM
You seem to have mastered the art of producing a poem that gets the reader to think deeper and keep their brain active. Also able to entice the reader to read the piece as a whole. Best regards David in NZ
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Date: 7/19/2024 1:56:00 PM
I see that this one may be directed to certain people in your life and it seems they may never get to read this, but they should.... I hope it not too much of a delicacy garnished for thieves..
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Date: 7/19/2024 5:37:00 AM
Well, this is certainly different than the others I've read with this theme. My fave line? "When your floors were too cold for your own bugs." Ha! How in the world did you come up with that? Hilarious. I luv bugz!
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 7/19/2024 7:38:00 AM
Hahaha … thank u Tom.. I’m so happy u liked it.. yes that line is different in different perspectives.. in this case I guess I was referring to men who r too cold to their own kins ..it was my funny way of saying it XD
Date: 7/18/2024 1:57:00 PM
Oh wow papi! This is deep and so well written for the prompt! Im glad youv finally delivered something and one that is full of so many metaphors! And the way youv made it flow is flawless. It gives a rather melancholic vibe. I can feel sadness too between those words! But let me tell you, what I absolutely loved “ When summer is gone only the snow shall bleed, A sonnet shaper than the dark Lead you read, ” wow sonnet sharper that the dark lead you read!!!! I cant even! Thats just so creative and clever and ofcourse that salt and pepper line i had to read twice haha actually three times! Hmm! I love extra spicy pepper and i seek for fluffy rugs but im left with too less pepper. Not good for my heart. What made you come up with the ammo line? Gun? I have been seeing guns and ammos in my sleep (hahah just kidding) connected arent we! Im extremely happy to see you post! Best wishes for the contest
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Ink Empress
Date: 7/18/2024 2:24:00 PM
Hahah! Diamond snatcher in your last line is epic! Love this one
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Date: 7/18/2024 2:20:00 PM
Hahahahha yea!!! That tower that thinks he is all that!!!! Such a disappointment!!! XD
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Ink Empress
Date: 7/18/2024 2:11:00 PM
Btw that tall sky one, is that about your wonderful ex? Hahhah
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Date: 7/18/2024 2:10:00 PM
Would a water gUn do? Or nerf? Haha. Crazy! U shud write about war next . Sun is a disappointment totally ahhaha
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Date: 7/18/2024 2:06:00 PM
Hahahaha thank u papi aeee… I have put tooo many disappointments in this piece .. didn’t know what to write aeee … yea the ammo maybe wash channeling through u aeee … dedicated to the ones that threaten but r all just talks with no walks … so only view la .. like movie scene aeee but the metaphor of this gun … aeeee i used ur ammos la…. Cannot find this gun XD…

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