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When Summer Is Gone Jcb Brul
Alas, my dear, we must away! From Summer homes upon the Bay. To winter in our warmer nests, In Southern climes, which suit us best. Your sister's grand debut went swell! Gentlemen flock where ‘ere we dwell. Invitations, voguish ballrooms, Soon she will ‘meet well’ her fair groom! Colorful flowers, is her way; Your Sister just as bright and gay. Of Summertime she is apart… But winter's cold is in your heart. Their hidden notes, confessed intent, Secretly stole, and back you sent.

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Date: 7/17/2024 10:24:00 AM
Fun! Sounds like an inviting romance.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/20/2024 11:33:00 AM
Romance and Jealousy and drama! Lol thanks!
Date: 7/17/2024 7:32:00 AM
really, well done, dear poet...good luck, your poem should do well
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/20/2024 11:32:00 AM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 7/16/2024 7:08:00 PM
Ahhh a debutante coming of age? Introduced to "society." And if she's pretty, the young gents will indeed flock to her. Nice approach Crys
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/17/2024 5:17:00 PM
Oh but she may not be pretty... maybe she's just cheerful and kind! ;)
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/16/2024 7:26:00 PM
Tysm! Yes you got it! And her older sister is jealous that younger receives so much attention. ;) The younger is like the summer, full of color and beauty. The older, like winter with a cold heart and frozen beauty. Xoxo
Date: 7/16/2024 2:29:00 PM
This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/16/2024 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Sara! This was a fun one to write for sure! I was listening to an audio book that is set in those days when balls and gowns were in vogue... their way of speaking/ writing was contagious. :)<3

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