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When Summer Arrives In Orange

Shirtless sitting on the earthen stoop Contemplating the task set gently in hand. Transformed a boy, looking intently into natures orb In the shade of the willows banging away the heat. Eyelashes closed, a flesh wrinkled sheet The sun dancing across my face through a kaleidoscope (Of trees softly whispering lazy lullaby’s). Orange sparks dancing to mesmerize Hidden only in the secret of a warm still array. Methodically peeling away layers citrus spray Of sealed in sun. The feeling is always the same Sweet pulp of excitement racing against the pulse. Juices filling the mouth saturating the tongue Swishing swirling, fixed firmly On one emotion. A still photograph With a blank face of concentration. Face cocked with a smile directed to one side Shoes untied, remnants of nature at my feet. Quickly running as to not forget the sensation Of Orange (leaving Spring for July).

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/11/2009 4:48:00 PM
Wow, holy ornage, batman - this is not only warm and beautiful, but I can taste oranges. awesome, and congrats on your win. :) Love, Kristin
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Date: 2/27/2009 1:38:00 AM
well done... Jason! congrats on your win... ~ Arany
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Date: 2/25/2009 11:53:00 AM
Jason, what an awesome write! Warmest congrats on your win in Christie's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/25/2009 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations, Jason, a great winning poem! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:19:00 AM
Jasen - congratulations on your place in the contest, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/15/2009 12:34:00 AM
lovely imagination! a beautiful picture.. you have painted!! i love the different words.. in there ..'sweet pulp of excitement..' loved it all!! and Jason thank you for your wonderful words on my poem: Innocence, really appreciate it! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/14/2009 11:01:00 AM
Hi Jason... I agree with Donna, I hope you have entered this into Christie's competition... its a real winner! Great imagery ! Thanks Jason for your comments
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Date: 2/14/2009 10:36:00 AM
This is very lyrical and lovely, Jason. I hope you've entered this into Christie's "The Soul of Sunshine" contest. Donna G.
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Date: 2/13/2009 1:32:00 PM
Thanks alot for that comment Jason..awesome stuff.
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Date: 2/13/2009 11:06:00 AM
Jason, I am just now discovering your poetry. I can't say enough! You make magic with your words....there is so much talent in your writing, I'm enjoying my discovery! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/9/2009 2:19:00 PM
Jason thank you for that awesome comment. I love the piece of yours and you should consider putting it in the contest. Thanks.
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Date: 2/9/2009 11:35:00 AM
Wonderful use of imagery in this piece. You did a great job of capturing the sun. Excellent.
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Date: 2/9/2009 11:29:00 AM
Interesting use of imagery for a creative poem. The title is wonderful. Keep up the good writing! Karen
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