When Summer Arrives In Orange

Shirtless sitting on the earthen stoop
Contemplating the task set gently in hand.

Transformed a boy, looking intently into natures orb
In the shade of the willows banging away the heat.

Eyelashes closed, a flesh wrinkled sheet
The sun dancing across my face through a kaleidoscope

                             (Of trees softly whispering lazy lullaby’s).

Orange sparks dancing to mesmerize
Hidden only in the secret of a warm still array.

Methodically peeling away layers citrus spray
Of sealed in sun.

The feeling is always the same
Sweet pulp of excitement racing against the pulse.

Juices filling the mouth saturating the tongue
Swishing swirling, fixed firmly


On one emotion. A still photograph
With a blank face of concentration.

Face cocked with a smile directed to one side
Shoes untied, remnants of nature at my feet.

Quickly running as to not forget the sensation
Of Orange 
                                   (leaving Spring for July).
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Reynolds Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 4:48 PM
Wow, holy ornage, batman - this is not only warm and beautiful, but I can taste oranges. awesome, and congrats on your win. :) Love, Kristin
P. Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 1:38 AM
well done... Jason! congrats on your win... ~ Arany
Winter Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 11:53 AM
Jason, what an awesome write! Warmest congrats on your win in Christie's contest! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations, Jason, a great winning poem! ~ Carrie
Jordan Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 8:19 AM
Jasen - congratulations on your place in the contest, God Bless, MJ
P. Avatar
February 15, 2009 at 12:34 AM
lovely imagination! a beautiful picture.. you have painted!! i love the different words.. in there ..'sweet pulp of excitement..' loved it all!! and Jason thank you for your wonderful words on my poem: Innocence, really appreciate it! ~ Arany
Williams Avatar
February 14, 2009 at 11:01 AM
Hi Jason... I agree with Donna, I hope you have entered this into Christie's competition... its a real winner! Great imagery ! Thanks Jason for your comments
Golden Avatar
February 14, 2009 at 10:36 AM
This is very lyrical and lovely, Jason. I hope you've entered this into Christie's "The Soul of Sunshine" contest. Donna G.
Higgins Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 1:32 PM
Thanks alot for that comment Jason..awesome stuff.
Richards Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 11:06 AM
Jason, I am just now discovering your poetry. I can't say enough! You make magic with your words....there is so much talent in your writing, I'm enjoying my discovery! ~ Carrie
Higgins Avatar
February 9, 2009 at 2:19 PM
Jason thank you for that awesome comment. I love the piece of yours and you should consider putting it in the contest. Thanks.
Higgins Avatar
February 9, 2009 at 11:35 AM
Wonderful use of imagery in this piece. You did a great job of capturing the sun. Excellent.
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February 9, 2009 at 11:29 AM
Interesting use of imagery for a creative poem. The title is wonderful. Keep up the good writing! Karen
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