Andrea Dietrich Poet Etheree

When Soup Crashed

When 
Soup crashed,
I went mad.
My fingers would
inevitably
click on  PoetrySoup
whenever I went online,
yet I'd be led to a blank page.
With no challenges, my muse was lost,
and I ached from missing all my good friends.

On the brighter side, dishes piling up 
in my sink is a thing of the past.
Hubbie enjoys me cleaning more;
I finally caught up with
my shows recorded on
DVR, and I’ve 
now started that
novel I’d
wished to
write!

(fictional account of a future possibility!!)

For David Williams'
Life without soup Poetry Contest

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John Watt November 11, 2020 at 9:43 PM Ha! You wrote this in 2012 as a 'fictional account of a future possibility'. It finally came true in 2020, the year nobody can wait until it's over. Were you thinking about this etheree when Soup was down for two days in July? Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2020 at 5:46 PM ha, I did all that stuff in 2020 except write a novel!

Debbie Duncan October 23, 2013 at 11:23 PM This is cute ,,,, I really didn't like the poem Angel Hearts, as you see I wrote it in 2012. I still think there's something missing. <3

James Fraser March 5, 2012 at 2:08 PM It's amazing how much this site has a hold on it's members. We appear to go into shock when we loose it for a while. It sure goes to show that it's a well liked site, and it's members of course. I'm glad this piece made it onto the winners podium Andrea :)

Fabiyas M V February 25, 2012 at 9:46 PM This is so fantastic,Andrea.Congratulations on your win!

Kim Merryman February 25, 2012 at 9:27 AM Congrats on your wonderful 1st place win, Andrea! Love, Kim

Lizanne Scholtz February 24, 2012 at 4:00 PM Congratulations on your win Andrea, love Elizabeth

Dinda Minardi February 24, 2012 at 7:43 AM A fascinating writing, Andrea.. I love the future you described :) Congrats.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 24, 2012 at 3:55 AM Well done many congrats on a big win xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 23, 2012 at 10:41 PM congrats Andrea on a great win for true words about our site luv..

Joyce Johnson February 23, 2012 at 6:16 PM Great win Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown February 23, 2012 at 1:08 PM Congratulations on the win in David Williams' "Life Without Soup" contest *Andrea*. Love, Carol ct

David Williams February 23, 2012 at 1:03 PM Andrea congratulations on your win, thanks for supporting my contest..David

Phyllis Babcock February 20, 2012 at 3:41 PM I know we really miss the soup when it is off line. Makes us realize how much time is spent here. Like the poem. love phyl

Black Eyed Susan February 20, 2012 at 1:37 PM way to look on the brightside! you must be a half full kind of girl :)

Iolanda Scripca February 13, 2012 at 11:05 PM PS IS addictive, I know it too :0) My novel is still in the rough draft stage... for many years now :( Nice Etheree, dear Andie! Happy Valentine's Day to you!!!

Jack Horne February 13, 2012 at 1:40 PM LOL, yes, I remember how frustrating that was - maybe you'll do all those things next time...

Jslambert Mister Roboto February 12, 2012 at 9:31 PM as difficult as time away from the Soup must be for a person as dedicated as you...I thoroughly suggest you take the time to complete a book. You have wayyyyy too much insight, skill, brains, and determination to not write this book! You have at least one buyer in me~ I support you every step of the way. I know we are opposites when it comes to style but much is to be learned from polar opposites. I enjoy reading your stuff.

Tim B February 12, 2012 at 4:46 PM It can be a daunting reality, but a time for contemplation and reflection on other life goals as you say. I too need to find time to write a novel that has been pecking at the back door of my stress sullied brain. Good luck in the contest, this was exceptionally written Mrs. Andrea!

Robert Johnson February 12, 2012 at 3:28 PM It's a good thing I only have an hour. Poetrysoup would drain me of all my power. Labor of loves and passions of such. I'd be a cripple if I didn't have this crutch. But dieing that sweet death would not be so bad. I'd pass away grateful for all that I had.

Gwendolen Song February 12, 2012 at 2:45 PM I am so glad those dishes will finally get washed, Andrea! lol. Just imagine having a clean refrig, garage, a manicured lawn, the list goes on and on...this is my super long weekend at work..I will sleep half of tomorrow and drop you some lines when I wake up tomorrow...leaving here in a bit. Hope all is well...this was a nice form to use for David's contest..You will do well! I loved the blog! Great remarks...Great teacher you ARE!!! Gwendolen

Matthew Anish February 12, 2012 at 1:53 PM Life without the soup! Unthinkable! Hope you can start with your ficiton! Ents are talking tree - like beings. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick February 12, 2012 at 1:23 PM Reads like a winner..Enjoyed..What would my life be like without soup, Princess, and family..Long, lonely, and boring..Good luck in the contest..Like the double Etheree..Sara Sara Kendrick February 12, 2012 at 1:24 PM Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Wilma Neels February 12, 2012 at 1:13 PM You got me smiling especially with the second one Andrea, all the best for David's contest! well I am off to la la land now :) love Wilma

Poet Destroyer A February 12, 2012 at 11:57 AM boo... lol.. can I wish you an early... congrats...lol..I'm kidding with you.. now let me explain about yesterday's comment.. ha ha..i was just paying you back... on what you are asking.... HUMM!!! let me see... almost everyone is calling me IRMA... ja ja ja... I don't mind by the way.. I think your hubby wishes the soup was gone forever... and so does my family.. thank you.pd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 12, 2012 at 9:59 AM a cool write Andrea.. expressing how we all felt when PS was down for a few days luv.. housework became priority rather than poetry.. great piece.. good luck .. a certain winner for sure sweets..

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