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When Softness Meets Hardness

Sweet and sassy me I am on the floor, won't you come baby, come. I love to tease, I love to kiss. Hush... hush... I love to tease, I love to please. Your time I'll freeze, You eyes I'll seize 'til you'll say: " Baby, please. Oh please!" I shall make you sweat and spin. Glossy rosy skin sparkle with exposed leg Dare! ah! dare to come and feel. Pout thin lips a delicious heart pink honey wells anyone wants a drink Bear, it's berry brush of thrill. Silky black long hair: a cascading merry fair on five inches silver stilettos I stand sultry with a purpose With red chiffon dress caressing my curves my low breathy voice jives with a saxophone Singing a song: your choice {swaying room as the music starts; strangers making the most of the dark} Half naked Adonis man His fresh musky aroma a champ.. He comes in ravaging stan Hard muscles round his arms yummy! clad on cheesy creamy charms on the floor he comes to devour a lady his eyes can't ignore tossing shyness far, he astride slow for his star There's a dazzle drizzle dash of wine as they start to explore, explore! A splash heightens their flower fever flush slowly oh so slowly, they are wet and wild her dress hugs her curves {mounds on silhouette view} so his jeans clang verve {his hardness a second skin} eyes to eyes they speak hips to hips they meet Holding hands tight they begin a dance of delight softness on lambada with hardness each stroke. each sway their touch kindles a fire their desirous nerves wired {as he blew air to her ears} he draws her near... near. one hand on her rear pressed to his frontier another hand to boil a rocket stir lingering to the hollow of her neck to her shoulders he ran bites and nibbles his other hand travels up burying his fingers to her smooth hair playful bites and nibbles turned to rain of kisses here and there, focusing on her pulses then he licks salty sweet taste quenching his thirst to her supple lips tongue fencing begun languidly leaving them breathless wanting... yearning more.. slowly he strips her dress.. {nothing to miss, for all is a feast} gazing long and thick to her pristine pearl peaks while his hands hover on heaven havens in rhythm that of a wedding march tracing. kneading. rubbing. on and on. on and on. sighs a crackling shifts thudding heartbeats a tropical flee. on and on. on and on... (c) 11:05pm October 04, 2014

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Date: 10/14/2014 8:19:00 PM
The poor fellow must be exhausted *lol*. All kidding aside I was captivated by your passionate tale. Congratulations!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/15/2014 8:55:00 PM
hahahahah thanks.. :D!
Date: 10/14/2014 12:40:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/15/2014 8:54:00 PM
thanks much sweet Jan.. :D!
Date: 10/14/2014 12:29:00 PM
- A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations, Olive ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/15/2014 8:53:00 PM
thanks much Anne Lise.. :) I added you in fb.. :) its lovely to see you there.. :) hugs as well
Date: 10/14/2014 11:34:00 AM
ohhh, is this for someone, eloi?...this is explosive!.. big cheers on your fine win!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/14/2014 9:38:00 PM
none none Nette,, :D!!! hahahha thanks much.. hope to see you soon.. :D
Date: 10/14/2014 7:37:00 AM
Amazing and passionate is ur write Olive! Congrats on huge win!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/14/2014 9:35:00 PM
thanks much . Dr. Upma.. :D I appreciate it.. :D
Date: 10/11/2014 9:41:00 PM
A tropical steam with breeze and branch bending with blowing loving...what a vision you are, rose upright on silver stars Olive. The scintillating sensation of heats graduation. "Your time I'll freeze, your eyes I'll seize...One hand on her rear pressed to his frontier..." that's a hot dance! Your rhthm and alliteration are superb! J.A.B.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/13/2014 10:19:00 AM
thanks much Justin,,
Date: 10/7/2014 3:56:00 PM
I'm lost for words Olive_eloi!! Have I met this flirty seductive girl somewhere before?! Great write for this contest....it should rocket to the top. // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/7/2014 7:27:00 PM
mmmmmn maybe? ammmmn well I don't know really.. :D? thanks PAul... :D
Date: 10/6/2014 7:38:00 PM
Enjoy it while you can---after 55 you can reverse the title. Lol Great write, Olive--- wish I could have read this when I was twenty.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/7/2014 7:07:00 AM
thanks for the drop .. :)
Date: 10/4/2014 9:53:00 PM
Well with my amazing powers of deduction, I conclude, you are the soft one!!!! Thus I am ......... Loved this Olive!!!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/6/2014 8:06:00 AM
you are what? :D? thanks buddy.. :D
Date: 10/4/2014 5:26:00 PM
beautifully penned olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/6/2014 8:05:00 AM
thanks much Liam.. :) I appreciate it.. :D
Date: 10/4/2014 2:14:00 PM
soooooooo seductive Olive sooooo sultry and steamy - soooooo sensational! good luck in the contest my friend this will blow his socks off! Hugs jan xxxx (am so pleased to see Stan got a mention lol)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/5/2014 10:38:00 AM
thanks much Jan.. :O :D (with a blush)
Date: 10/4/2014 10:32:00 AM
Dreamy, sensuous seductive moments caressing my mind as I read this desirable to become steamy piece Olive. With each read, I image more and more wishing to be Adonis in the poem. Good luck in the contest with this steamy write, James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/5/2014 2:14:00 AM
weeeee.. :o i was actually blushing while im making this.. :O?! thanks for the drop by.. :D

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