When Softness Meets Hardness

Sweet and sassy me
I am on the floor,
  won't you come baby, come.

I love to tease, I love to kiss.
   Hush... hush... 
I love to tease, I love to please.
   Your time I'll freeze, You eyes I'll seize
'til you'll say: " Baby, please. Oh please!"

I shall make you sweat and spin.
   Glossy rosy skin sparkle with exposed leg
  Dare! ah! dare to come and feel.
Pout thin lips a delicious heart pink
   honey wells anyone wants a drink
Bear, it's berry brush of thrill.

Silky black long hair: a cascading merry fair
    on five inches silver stilettos
  I stand sultry with a purpose
With red chiffon dress caressing my curves 
   my low breathy voice 
      jives with a saxophone
Singing a song: your choice

{swaying room as the music starts;
strangers making the most of the dark}

Half naked Adonis man
   His fresh musky aroma a champ..
     He comes in ravaging stan
   Hard muscles round his arms
yummy! clad on cheesy creamy charms

on the floor 
   he comes to devour
      a lady his eyes can't ignore
   tossing shyness far, he astride slow for his star
There's a dazzle drizzle dash of wine
    as they start to explore, explore!
A splash heightens their flower fever flush
   slowly oh so slowly, they are wet and wild 

her dress hugs her curves
   {mounds on silhouette view}
so his jeans clang verve
   {his hardness a second skin}
    eyes to eyes they speak
     hips to hips they meet
Holding hands tight 
   they begin a dance of delight
softness on lambada with hardness

each stroke. each sway
  their touch kindles a fire
    their desirous nerves wired
{as he blew air to her ears}
  he draws her near... near.
    one hand on her rear
  pressed to his frontier
another hand to boil a rocket stir
 lingering to the hollow of her neck to her shoulders
he ran bites and nibbles
 his other hand travels up 
   burying his fingers to her smooth hair
playful bites and nibbles turned to rain of kisses
  here and there, focusing on her pulses
then he licks salty sweet taste
  quenching his thirst to her supple lips
tongue fencing begun languidly
  leaving them breathless 
wanting... yearning more..

slowly he strips her dress..
   {nothing to miss, for all is a feast}
gazing long and thick to her pristine pearl peaks
   while his hands hover on heaven havens
in rhythm that of a wedding march
   tracing. kneading. rubbing.
on and on. on and on.
  sighs a crackling shifts
 thudding heartbeats a tropical flee.
on and on. on and on...

(c)
11:05pm
October 04, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/14/2014 8:19:00 PM
The poor fellow must be exhausted *lol*. All kidding aside I was captivated by your passionate tale. Congratulations!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/15/2014 8:55:00 PM
hahahahah thanks.. :D!
Date: 10/14/2014 12:40:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/15/2014 8:54:00 PM
thanks much sweet Jan.. :D!
Date: 10/14/2014 12:29:00 PM
- A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations, Olive ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/15/2014 8:53:00 PM
thanks much Anne Lise.. :) I added you in fb.. :) its lovely to see you there.. :) hugs as well
Date: 10/14/2014 11:34:00 AM
ohhh, is this for someone, eloi?...this is explosive!.. big cheers on your fine win!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/14/2014 9:38:00 PM
none none Nette,, :D!!! hahahha thanks much.. hope to see you soon.. :D
Date: 10/14/2014 7:37:00 AM
Amazing and passionate is ur write Olive! Congrats on huge win!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/14/2014 9:35:00 PM
thanks much . Dr. Upma.. :D I appreciate it.. :D
Date: 10/11/2014 9:41:00 PM
A tropical steam with breeze and branch bending with blowing loving...what a vision you are, rose upright on silver stars Olive. The scintillating sensation of heats graduation. "Your time I'll freeze, your eyes I'll seize...One hand on her rear pressed to his frontier..." that's a hot dance! Your rhthm and alliteration are superb! J.A.B.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/13/2014 10:19:00 AM
thanks much Justin,,
Date: 10/7/2014 3:56:00 PM
I'm lost for words Olive_eloi!! Have I met this flirty seductive girl somewhere before?! Great write for this contest....it should rocket to the top. // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/7/2014 7:27:00 PM
mmmmmn maybe? ammmmn well I don't know really.. :D? thanks PAul... :D
Date: 10/6/2014 7:38:00 PM
Enjoy it while you can---after 55 you can reverse the title. Lol Great write, Olive--- wish I could have read this when I was twenty.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/7/2014 7:07:00 AM
thanks for the drop .. :)
Date: 10/4/2014 9:53:00 PM
Well with my amazing powers of deduction, I conclude, you are the soft one!!!! Thus I am ......... Loved this Olive!!!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/6/2014 8:06:00 AM
you are what? :D? thanks buddy.. :D
Date: 10/4/2014 5:26:00 PM
beautifully penned olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/6/2014 8:05:00 AM
thanks much Liam.. :) I appreciate it.. :D
Date: 10/4/2014 2:14:00 PM
soooooooo seductive Olive sooooo sultry and steamy - soooooo sensational! good luck in the contest my friend this will blow his socks off! Hugs jan xxxx (am so pleased to see Stan got a mention lol)
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Date: 10/5/2014 10:38:00 AM
thanks much Jan.. :O :D (with a blush)
Date: 10/4/2014 10:32:00 AM
Dreamy, sensuous seductive moments caressing my mind as I read this desirable to become steamy piece Olive. With each read, I image more and more wishing to be Adonis in the poem. Good luck in the contest with this steamy write, James :)
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Date: 10/5/2014 2:14:00 AM
weeeee.. :o i was actually blushing while im making this.. :O?! thanks for the drop by.. :D
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