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When Snowy Petals Fell Ct

I smiled when snowy petals fell, So cold and wet against my eye. The frost of age — its spellbound knell. My waning wake; it’s densely spry. My age old tongue catches the drift. Soft wrap, about my arms, a gift. Fresh scent, a lift — newborn adorned. The clefts, where light does land, forewarned. When I smiled, snowy petals fell Against my eye, so cold and wet. The spellbound knell, its frost of age, It’s densely spry, my waning wake. My wobbly knees snowspent,* they cry To gentle Lord before I die.
9/3/2020 Contest - Charonnet Sponsor - Charles Messina 8 syllables per line - howmanysyllables.com *snowspent - my word - drained of energy, and falling
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Allison Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 10:02 AM
such delicate imagery Kim, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 4:48 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Chamberlain Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 8:07 AM
I enjoyed your poem, congratulations on your placement. :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 4:47 PM
Thank you, Joanna!
Messina Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 7:08 AM
Kim, beautiful poetry as usual. It's probably my fault for not explaining it well enough, but the format was just a little off (My apologies). Anyway, congratulations on your placement in my contest. I hope all is well. Hugs Charlie
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 4:46 PM
Thanks, Charlie! In what way? Send me email. Thanks.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 1:43 AM
I know I am not going to win any medals by saying I am ready for winter, but this lovely has put me in the mood for snow.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 6:19 AM
I’m ready for it all! Love ya!
Romios Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 5:35 PM
This is just took beautiful to not win, Kim, Pangie xx
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 7:10 PM
Oh thank you so much, sweet lady! xx
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