When Silence Is Too Loud

shadowed in darkness, sniffing as a hound creeping about without releasing a sound begging to be noticed, wanting to be found silence is too loud when its echoes resound behold, it comes creeping to known places among those of us who wear innocent faces cajoling in soft whispers to gain good graces offering false humility and fridgid embraces silence cries with stale breath for adoration quietly seducing with phrases of flirtation spawned to be the wielder of denigration a stealth mute, soused on pride's libation ink splotches fingered from hushed tongue will never be songs aptly written to be sung in silence it leaks acid and toxins are sprung disguised as a friend but what lies it's flung SPEAK the truth you have neglected to say then return to shadows where you oft play your silence has not fooled those you betray sheath your vile dagger then be on your way

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Date: 5/17/2017 12:17:00 PM
So very well done Lin, terrific third verse. This truly is one of the best I've read in some time. First place is yours my dear in my contest, a deafening winner...
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/17/2017 1:06:00 PM
It's not for any contest, Charlie, so you can have it. lol Thanks for liking this one so well. Nice seeing you.
Date: 5/16/2017 8:11:00 PM
The truth hurts. Don't let them get you down.
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/16/2017 8:38:00 PM
Sometimes the villain is blind to his/her own faults. No one here could ever get me down, but thank you for your encouragement, Tim.
Date: 5/16/2017 6:50:00 PM
Wow Lin, this one bites, poor fella who is on the receiving end of this one! Great work, great rhymes, false humility and frigid embraces, known a few people like that in my time, love the insightful write!
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/16/2017 8:37:00 PM
The 'poor fella' doesn't need sympathy, John, and I wouldn't risk toxic poisoning by taking a literal bite. Thank you so very much for the complimentary comments.
Date: 5/16/2017 6:41:00 PM
Love the Rhyme and the imaginary, Lin ~*
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/16/2017 8:35:00 PM
I'm grateful for your kind comments, Eve. Thank you.
Date: 5/16/2017 6:32:00 PM
so apropos
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/16/2017 8:35:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Truth-Teller.
Date: 5/16/2017 5:05:00 PM
This one is terse but appropriately so. A very professional write. Excellent poetry. I absorb as I read. You are a great influence. Thank you, armand.
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/16/2017 8:33:00 PM
Your labeling this poem as a professional write is the best kind of comment an author can receive. Thank you very much, Armand.
Date: 5/16/2017 2:57:00 PM
Great monorhyme Lin I too think of silence lurking the shadows:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/16/2017 3:50:00 PM
Devious does dirty deeds while pretending to be the victim. Transparent to many of us. Thanks, Jan.
Date: 5/16/2017 1:48:00 PM
Sharp pen!
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Date: 5/16/2017 3:47:00 PM
I sharpened the nib before beginning this one, Maureen. Thanks for noticing.
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