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When She


That look in her Scotsman's eyes
When his darling opened her thighs
Such a welcoming sight
He entered his night
As loving groans mellowed to sighs




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Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2015 at 11:43 PM

a sexy one!!

April 11, 2015 at 7:48 AM

A wandering mind in words Andrea, James :)

April 8, 2015 at 1:51 AM

Got a visual on that one...heard the sighs.

April 8, 2015 at 2:02 PM

Many thanks MLK, glad you enjoyed this different take to the Limerick Form, smiles, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 8, 2015 at 12:54 AM

Dino James, sultry! sultry!!!!//olive eloisa :D!

April 8, 2015 at 2:01 PM

Sultry indeed, and so different to use the Limerick Form away from it's jovial naughty joking format. Mega hugs Oliz //Dino James// xx

April 7, 2015 at 1:49 PM

Steamy! Bringing a limerick to the next level! A 7 from me

April 7, 2015 at 2:04 PM

Thank you kindly Anna. Thought I'd try another angle to the Limerick Form. Glad you enjoyed, smiles, James :)

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