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Please go to Jerry T Curtis page to hear the French translation put to music. What a nice thing for him to do! Thanks, Jerry! So honored!

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When Paris Was All The Rage

A quarter rest breathed into my consciousness, a playful pretense of a warm hand gently placed above my heart, calming my sedulous spirit.
—by the Poet

When Paris Was All The Rage

Slow sound of the sax; I lay back and listen to good-old-day lyrics, when Paris was all the rage, and the time of love has past for the old maid sipping wine on a sidewalk café; staring, are we, into the eyes of a painting rainy and colorful; romanticized by the simmering sound of the sax; its notes buoyant on the Seine. Raindrops of gray, blue and cherry blossom; a scant smile on red lips, reminiscing the fading beau and hours; clicking heels and handsome dress. Sedate and cocksure lyrics and vocables regulate my heart, warm my pulse points. A voice croons, as the ‘phonist’s fingers gyrate, tingling all the senses; cabernet dimmer switch.
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Layne Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 7:04 AM
Very lyrical... You really set the scene here. Congratulations, Kim! The French translation, complete with music, adds another cool layer to this.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 6:38 PM
Thank you, Trina!
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August 26, 2025 at 12:16 AM
A beautiful poem Kim, love how Jerry put the words to music… Beryl
Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2025 at 5:17 AM
He did such a great job! Thank you, Beryl!
Nicole Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 5:00 PM
' are we, into the eyes of a painting, romanticized by the simmering sound of the sax. ' Such a beautiful image to behold. Congratulations Kim, on receiving Poem of the Day. So sweet of Jerry to place your words to music. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 6:29 PM
It was so nice of him! I love it!
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 12:29 PM
POTD. Big congrats!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 6:25 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Anaya Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 9:14 AM
Fabulous! Listening to the song in French with the organ and sax, ah oui, magnifique. Spine tingling! Congrats on the POTD Kim and JTC! Auguste blessings
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 12:21 PM
Thank you, Anaya! Hugs
Fleming Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 1:42 PM
I knew straight away that you must have experienced this to write about the place so evocatively. This is simply stunning!!! I regard this as poetry of the very highest order...one of your very, very best, Kim. This is very special indeed. :) john
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 2:10 PM
Jerry T Curtis translated this into French and put it to song: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/kim_rodrigues_when_paris_was_1754312
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 2:09 PM
I appreciate you so much, John and so glad you found this special!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 3:34 AM
What a pity I was never a painter. This poem is so evocative. Pleasure to read you.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 5:57 AM
Thank you so much! I always and forever appreciate you, my friend!
DiMino Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 12:28 PM
So lovely, and sweet. Yes, once in awhile I think back. I did not have the perfect nose, the perfect hair...but youth was perfect! Young people, be less critical, and make the most of it.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 5:58 AM
What we know after so many years, the kids will learn when they are our ages, but some might gain wisdom ahead of time. Hugs
Sidwell Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Beautiful poem! What a great setting and atmosphere you’ve established!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 12:12 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Greenhough Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 6:39 AM
I enjoy your poem. I've heard that Paris is fabulous.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 12:12 PM
A fun place to visit!
Vaso Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 1:41 AM
My favorite city in the whole world, loved this.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 5:01 AM
Thank you! I was there one weekend, many years ago, now. We walked endlessly. We visited the catacombs, Notre Dame, the Louvre (mais oui!) It had been a dream since High School. The day we went to the Louvre, I forgot it was my husband’s birthday…we had a good laugh that evening “Kim, did you forget it’s my birthday.” Well, that was a first! lol
Hind Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 5:41 PM
This is enchanting, Kim....so alluring, the sounds and the wine. I enjoyed this. <3 :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 8:50 PM
Thank you kindly, Paige!
Rolland Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 5:13 PM
so sweet memories, the charms of Paris, you are a lucky one, elegant poetry too enjoy your week end dear Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 8:50 PM
Thank you, Yann!
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August 22, 2025 at 4:24 PM
captivating poem, dear Kim. Outstanding imagery, especially in these lines: Raindrops of gray, blue and cherry blossom; a scant smile on red lips, reminiscing the fading beau and hours; clicking heels and handsome dress. Enjoy your upcoming weekend, hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 8:51 PM
Happy Weekend! So glad you liked those lines! Thank you, Sara!
Crandall Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 4:21 PM
atmospheric!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 8:51 PM
Love your one word…makes me smile! Thank you!
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