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Please go to Jerry T Curtis page to hear the French translation put to music. What a nice thing for him to do! Thanks, Jerry! So honored!

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When Paris Was All The Rage

A quarter rest breathed into my consciousness, a playful pretense of a warm hand gently placed above my heart, calming my sedulous spirit.
—by the Poet

When Paris Was All The Rage

Slow sound of the sax; I lay back and listen to good-old-day lyrics, when Paris was all the rage, and the time of love has past for the old maid sipping wine on a sidewalk café; staring, are we, into the eyes of a painting rainy and colorful; romanticized by the simmering sound of the sax; its notes buoyant on the Seine. Raindrops of gray, blue and cherry blossom; a scant smile on red lips, reminiscing the fading beau and hours; clicking heels and handsome dress. Sedate and cocksure lyrics and vocables regulate my heart, warm my pulse points. A voice croons, as the ‘phonist’s fingers gyrate, tingling all the senses; cabernet dimmer switch.

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Date: 9/7/2025 7:04:00 AM
Very lyrical... You really set the scene here. Congratulations, Kim! The French translation, complete with music, adds another cool layer to this.
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Date: 8/26/2025 12:16:00 AM
A beautiful poem Kim, love how Jerry put the words to music… Beryl
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2025 5:17:00 AM
He did such a great job! Thank you, Beryl!
Date: 8/25/2025 5:00:00 PM
' are we, into the eyes of a painting, romanticized by the simmering sound of the sax. ' Such a beautiful image to behold. Congratulations Kim, on receiving Poem of the Day. So sweet of Jerry to place your words to music. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2025 6:29:00 PM
It was so nice of him! I love it!
Date: 8/25/2025 4:36:00 PM
Exquisite
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2025 6:26:00 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 8/25/2025 12:29:00 PM
POTD. Big congrats!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2025 6:25:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 8/25/2025 9:14:00 AM
Fabulous! Listening to the song in French with the organ and sax, ah oui, magnifique. Spine tingling! Congrats on the POTD Kim and JTC! Auguste blessings
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2025 12:21:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya! Hugs
Date: 8/24/2025 1:42:00 PM
I knew straight away that you must have experienced this to write about the place so evocatively. This is simply stunning!!! I regard this as poetry of the very highest order...one of your very, very best, Kim. This is very special indeed. :) john
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2025 2:10:00 PM
Jerry T Curtis translated this into French and put it to song: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/kim_rodrigues_when_paris_was_1754312
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2025 2:09:00 PM
I appreciate you so much, John and so glad you found this special!
Date: 8/24/2025 3:34:00 AM
What a pity I was never a painter. This poem is so evocative. Pleasure to read you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2025 5:57:00 AM
Thank you so much! I always and forever appreciate you, my friend!
Date: 8/23/2025 12:28:00 PM
So lovely, and sweet. Yes, once in awhile I think back. I did not have the perfect nose, the perfect hair...but youth was perfect! Young people, be less critical, and make the most of it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2025 5:58:00 AM
What we know after so many years, the kids will learn when they are our ages, but some might gain wisdom ahead of time. Hugs
Date: 8/23/2025 11:33:00 AM
Beautiful poem! What a great setting and atmosphere you’ve established!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2025 12:12:00 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Date: 8/23/2025 6:39:00 AM
I enjoy your poem. I've heard that Paris is fabulous.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2025 12:12:00 PM
A fun place to visit!
Date: 8/23/2025 1:41:00 AM
My favorite city in the whole world, loved this.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2025 5:01:00 AM
Thank you! I was there one weekend, many years ago, now. We walked endlessly. We visited the catacombs, Notre Dame, the Louvre (mais oui!) It had been a dream since High School. The day we went to the Louvre, I forgot it was my husband’s birthday…we had a good laugh that evening “Kim, did you forget it’s my birthday.” Well, that was a first! lol
Date: 8/22/2025 5:41:00 PM
This is enchanting, Kim....so alluring, the sounds and the wine. I enjoyed this. <3 :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2025 8:50:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Paige!
Date: 8/22/2025 5:13:00 PM
so sweet memories, the charms of Paris, you are a lucky one, elegant poetry too enjoy your week end dear Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2025 8:50:00 PM
Thank you, Yann!
Date: 8/22/2025 4:24:00 PM
captivating poem, dear Kim. Outstanding imagery, especially in these lines: Raindrops of gray, blue and cherry blossom; a scant smile on red lips, reminiscing the fading beau and hours; clicking heels and handsome dress. Enjoy your upcoming weekend, hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2025 8:51:00 PM
Happy Weekend! So glad you liked those lines! Thank you, Sara!
Date: 8/22/2025 4:21:00 PM
atmospheric!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2025 8:51:00 PM
Love your one word…makes me smile! Thank you!
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