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When Paradise Returns

When Paradise Returns

That first year we cursed
the flood, channeled from
the border creek and basin of lakes
that added their support
King tides gave flux to sheets 
of water, rising silently after falling,
following the low-lying land
spilling once again between
the  waiting paperbarks

Our cattle, cut off from us, stood
utterly dejected - birds came
with the sounds of pardise,
re-claiming their natural habitat

That next year we waited with
the paperbarks, watching for the birds
to fill the wetland
waiting for them to fill the silent
fields again

EARLY DECEMBER 2018,ANY FORM,ANY THEME,UPTO A MAX OF 20 lines
Contest Judged:  12/3/2018 11:40:00 PM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 
First Place

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Date: 1/28/2019 5:01:00 AM
its great writings
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/28/2019 8:01:00 AM
Hi Mahtab Appreciate your kind words.
Date: 12/4/2018 2:03:00 PM
A pretty good nature poem--congrats on your win!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/28/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thanks so much LJ: Nature never fails to inspire me.
Date: 12/4/2018 10:20:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, Suzanne , very well written. It stirs a reader's imagination with your creative imagery and the emotions. Congratulations on your win!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/6/2018 5:24:00 PM
Thanks Eve. I appreciate your kind comments. Hugs SuZ
Date: 7/22/2013 6:50:00 PM
Charming provocative imagery made me want more.. congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/22/2013 7:16:00 AM
Suz congrats on you fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/21/2013 8:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, SuZ! Annalise
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Date: 7/21/2013 7:34:00 PM
Suz, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... :-) nice entry, for Anne's any poem contest. always & forever ** LINDA
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Date: 7/21/2013 7:31:00 PM
Congratulation my friend on your win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/21/2013 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations SuZ on your awesome win. It is a great poem and I covet your talent... Jake
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Date: 7/21/2013 1:28:00 PM
An awesome write with vivid imagery. You know how to keep the reader enthralled, Suz. Congratulations on winning Anne's contest. Well-deserved, my friend. Licia :-)
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Date: 7/21/2013 1:09:00 PM
You drew a vivid picture with your words. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/21/2013 1:00:00 PM
Suz, congratulations on your win in the contest ;) enjoyed reading your poem tonight! - Wilma
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Date: 7/8/2013 8:51:00 PM
Amazing beautiful write....suz ty:0)
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Date: 7/8/2013 8:40:00 AM
When paradise does return, will they be ready? Very nice piece!
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Date: 7/8/2013 5:04:00 AM
- A very beautiful poem to read, thank you for sharing it with me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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