When Paradise Returns

When Paradise Returns

That first year we cursed
the flood, channeled from
the border creek and basin of lakes
that added their support
King tides gave flux to sheets 
of water, rising silently after falling,
following the low-lying land
spilling once again between
the  waiting paperbarks

Our cattle, cut off from us, stood
utterly dejected - birds came
with the sounds of pardise,
re-claiming their natural habitat

That next year we waited with
the paperbarks, watching for the birds
to fill the wetland
waiting for them to fill the silent
fields again

EARLY DECEMBER 2018,ANY FORM,ANY THEME,UPTO A MAX OF 20 lines
Contest Judged:  12/3/2018 11:40:00 PM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 
First Place
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Bangalee Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 5:01 AM
its great writings
Delaney Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Hi Mahtab Appreciate your kind words.
Carber Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 2:03 PM
A pretty good nature poem--congrats on your win!
Delaney Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Thanks so much LJ: Nature never fails to inspire me.
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 10:20 AM
I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, Suzanne , very well written. It stirs a reader's imagination with your creative imagery and the emotions. Congratulations on your win!
Delaney Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 5:24 PM
Thanks Eve. I appreciate your kind comments. Hugs SuZ
Guzzi Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 6:50 PM
Charming provocative imagery made me want more.. congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Suz congrats on you fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Haick Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 8:41 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, SuZ! Annalise
A   Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 7:34 PM
Suz, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... :-) nice entry, for Anne's any poem contest. always & forever ** LINDA
Devnath  Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 7:31 PM
Congratulation my friend on your win. Loved always, bl
Posey Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 5:54 PM
Congratulations SuZ on your awesome win. It is a great poem and I covet your talent... Jake
Hendricks Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 1:28 PM
An awesome write with vivid imagery. You know how to keep the reader enthralled, Suz. Congratulations on winning Anne's contest. Well-deserved, my friend. Licia :-)
Johnson Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 1:09 PM
You drew a vivid picture with your words. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Neels Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 1:00 PM
Suz, congratulations on your win in the contest ;) enjoyed reading your poem tonight! - Wilma
Thomas Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 8:51 PM
Amazing beautiful write....suz ty:0)
Tacito Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 8:40 AM
When paradise does return, will they be ready? Very nice piece!
Andresen Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 5:04 AM
- A very beautiful poem to read, thank you for sharing it with me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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