When Ones Heart Flutters

her infectious smile attracts, like moths to a flame petite, tanned, dark locks ones heart flutters amidst thoughts her beauty, abounds, I'm caught .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 8:56 PM
You are a romantic at heart. Beneath that complex genius mind, like all of us you dream. I love it James with your talent these are easy for you.
Fraser Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 12:23 PM
Happy Friday to you Maurice :) thank you again for your wonderful comments, I'm blushing, James :)
Mcintosh Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 3:39 PM
Love this.... Love and Prayers for you, Gina
Fraser Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 4:13 PM
Thank you kindly Gina, James :)
Canon Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 5:40 AM
How In love you could be...
Fraser Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Thanks kindly John, if only. I haven't written such poetry for a while, hence this piece, James :)
Gorelick Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 8:59 PM
Oh oh, caught up by beauty..careful! lol. I love your poem BG
Fraser Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 2:45 PM
I haven't written like this for a number of months, so I thought I was due to scribble something down. Thanks kindly Barbara, James :)
Smith Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 6:33 PM
You had me at smile....fabulous my friend
Fraser Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 2:41 PM
I wrote more of these poems a while back. Need to write a few more. Many thanks Tim :)
Allison Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 3:50 PM
Stunning imagery James you captured this moment to perfection! Hugs Jan xxx
Fraser Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 2:36 PM
A sweet romantic poems does the heart wonders at times, thanks Jan :) xx
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