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When Ones Heart Flutters

her infectious smile attracts, like moths to a flame petite, tanned, dark locks ones heart flutters amidst thoughts her beauty, abounds, I'm caught .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/8/2014 8:56:00 PM
You are a romantic at heart. Beneath that complex genius mind, like all of us you dream. I love it James with your talent these are easy for you.
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James Fraser
Date: 9/12/2014 12:23:00 PM
Happy Friday to you Maurice :) thank you again for your wonderful comments, I'm blushing, James :)
Date: 9/8/2014 3:39:00 PM
Love this.... Love and Prayers for you, Gina
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James Fraser
Date: 9/8/2014 4:13:00 PM
Thank you kindly Gina, James :)
Date: 9/8/2014 5:40:00 AM
How In love you could be...
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James Fraser
Date: 9/8/2014 2:57:00 PM
Thanks kindly John, if only. I haven't written such poetry for a while, hence this piece, James :)
Date: 9/7/2014 8:59:00 PM
Oh oh, caught up by beauty..careful! lol. I love your poem BG
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James Fraser
Date: 9/8/2014 2:45:00 PM
I haven't written like this for a number of months, so I thought I was due to scribble something down. Thanks kindly Barbara, James :)
Date: 9/7/2014 6:33:00 PM
You had me at smile....fabulous my friend
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James Fraser
Date: 9/8/2014 2:41:00 PM
I wrote more of these poems a while back. Need to write a few more. Many thanks Tim :)
Date: 9/7/2014 3:50:00 PM
Stunning imagery James you captured this moment to perfection! Hugs Jan xxx
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James Fraser
Date: 9/8/2014 2:36:00 PM
A sweet romantic poems does the heart wonders at times, thanks Jan :) xx

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