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When No Star Shined

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Once, when no star shined
on slick, black, asphalt roads,
the murky wetness of November's 
watered nights a freedom-feeling 
and strangeness-sense inspired.

The moisture lubricated
sluggish mental cogs that
all the dirty, dry, autumnal 
season rusted tight and atrophied.
Wildness no man can tell I knew then.

All November's labored length
my nightly notions filled:
my bacchic spirit soared, and flew,
traveled far, saw much in waking dream,
along a single street, wet and splotched 
with light from cars which coughed their fumes
and passed my momentary immortality.

And now...time has come when 
I no longer feel delight to revel 
in the wildness that I knew:
senses, now subordinate to sense,
defuse the spell and  November nights 
are merely murky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/26/2012 4:42:00 PM
senses, now subordinate to sense, defuse the spell at wisdom's will....so true, yet memories still linger, only slightly dulled by the passage of time. Imagination still takes flight.
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Date: 6/15/2011 7:44:00 AM
wow. I really enjoy the read of talented writers. To be pulled in at the opening of this piece and to be carried so well throughout the work takes a special skill that you show here. Very good work!
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