Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Italian Sonnet

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When Nerves and Pulse Congest

WHEN NERVES AND PULSE CONGEST

Tender are the days brushed with thoughts of light
when yesterday rolling, rolling are the tears...
Jagged nerves and pulse congest in colliding repair,
they... rise to roar beams and rays of medley grace.
Glitters of gold and red cartwheel slow on my face,
I, before filthy shades of earth stand like a knight
to whoever dares,  forgetting crime  as I fight!
Even to ember flames of days, I... brave to step and chase
for if deep the earths' steep it births you: "my sunshine",
I keep forth to reap a mirth: me being with you.
Black as coal creep, it rebirth night that seeps the signs
but later sun peeps, its smile girths our blues.
To a new life, new day, I faithfully consign
with burning daylight as my sweep leap to have you...
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***Sponsor	rob carmack
Contest Name	Screwed IV 
~~5th Place~~


Olive Eloisa Guillermo
11:02 pm. April 24, 2015

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Kim Merryman July 10, 2015 at 9:58 PM A lovely write, Olive! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Skat A July 7, 2015 at 3:00 PM good one...sk Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 2, 2015 at 1:32 PM Thanks...

Poet Destroyer A July 7, 2015 at 2:05 PM nice win. PD Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 2, 2015 at 1:31 PM Thanks much

Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2015 at 7:59 AM You have a way with words, congrats on your win. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 24, 2015 at 9:41 AM thank you Richard.. =') pleased of your comment..

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 7, 2015 at 3:45 AM Great write Olive! Congrats on big win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 24, 2015 at 9:41 AM thank you so much Dr. Upma.. :)!

Debbie Guzzi April 28, 2015 at 10:40 AM Life's up & downs yes? But all and all a grand gift LIFE> Light & Love Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2015 at 3:22 AM indeed Debbie.. :)! thanks for thr drop by.. :)!

Abdelwaheb Dhaou April 26, 2015 at 11:24 AM Awesome piece,pregnant with insightful imagery ! A. Dhaou. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2015 at 3:19 AM thank you so much for the lovely comment you passed by.. :) ~olive eloisa

Noel Villarosa April 26, 2015 at 4:16 AM This captures the heart and imagination of your readers. Your poem truly set forth what you feel. It has all the element of being interesting to read, and the colorful imagery releases your reader from their dull moments and leads them to the journey you have created. Nice reading this, kabayan. Thank you. (^_^) Noel Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2015 at 3:21 AM thank much kabayan I hope the judge will be convinced though.. as i took a chance on how o interpret the theme.. :)

Scott Thirtyseven April 25, 2015 at 11:28 AM Stunning first line, what a way to introduce a poem, and what a great poem to introduce. Nice words. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 29, 2015 at 6:27 AM thanks much Scott.. :)!!!

Emile Pinet April 25, 2015 at 10:41 AM As always the author pours out her soul and paints her words with experience and emotion. Emile. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 29, 2015 at 6:26 AM thanks much Emile.. :)! :)

James Fraser April 25, 2015 at 10:15 AM Soon nerves and pulses will merge, amidst reliving previous scenes. For I'll be waiting for she, arms open like loving dreams. Another wonderful poem little one, hugs aplenty soon//Dino James xxxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 26, 2015 at 10:47 PM Huge James, I dance along with your comment. know why? they are a beauty, can't deny.. :)!!! (((hugs)))~olive eloisa.. :)~

Milton Robertson April 25, 2015 at 8:34 AM WOW Beautiful Olive Simply Beautiful. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 26, 2015 at 10:13 PM Hi Milton, thank you for dropping your beautiful comment!~olive eloisa :)!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2015 at 1:56 PM - A poem I enjoy reading, dear Olive - It is really beautiful - I wish you and your family one beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 25, 2015 at 6:16 AM Amiga Anne Lise, thank you for dropping by.. :)!! I wish you will have a blessed weekend too and i hope your father doing great.. :)! hugs back tight and warm//olive eloisa :)!

Jan Allison April 24, 2015 at 10:55 AM Filled with love and desire Olive - I especially love the final couplet:-) Hugs Janxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 25, 2015 at 6:12 AM thank you so much Jan.. :)!!! I always appreciate your drop by.. :)!!! Indeed, it must be read as like how you perceive it.. :)!!! hugs back~olive eloisa :)!