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WHEN NERVES AND PULSE CONGEST Tender are the days brushed with thoughts of light when yesterday rolling, rolling are the tears... Jagged nerves and pulse congest in colliding repair, they... rise to roar beams and rays of medley grace. Glitters of gold and red cartwheel slow on my face, I, before filthy shades of earth stand like a knight to whoever dares, forgetting crime as I fight! Even to ember flames of days, I... brave to step and chase for if deep the earths' steep it births you: "my sunshine", I keep forth to reap a mirth: me being with you. Black as coal creep, it rebirth night that seeps the signs but later sun peeps, its smile girths our blues. To a new life, new day, I faithfully consign with burning daylight as my sweep leap to have you... __________________________________________________ ***Sponsor rob carmack Contest Name Screwed IV ~~5th Place~~ Olive Eloisa Guillermo 11:02 pm. April 24, 2015

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Date: 7/10/2015 9:58:00 PM
A lovely write, Olive! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/7/2015 3:00:00 PM
good one...sk
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Date: 10/2/2015 1:32:00 PM
Thanks...
Date: 7/7/2015 2:05:00 PM
nice win. PD
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Date: 10/2/2015 1:31:00 PM
Thanks much
Date: 7/7/2015 7:59:00 AM
You have a way with words, congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/24/2015 9:41:00 AM
thank you Richard.. =') pleased of your comment..
Date: 7/7/2015 3:45:00 AM
Great write Olive! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 7/24/2015 9:41:00 AM
thank you so much Dr. Upma.. :)!
Date: 4/28/2015 10:40:00 AM
Life's up & downs yes? But all and all a grand gift LIFE> Light & Love
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:22:00 AM
indeed Debbie.. :)! thanks for thr drop by.. :)!
Date: 4/26/2015 11:24:00 AM
Awesome piece,pregnant with insightful imagery ! A. Dhaou.
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:19:00 AM
thank you so much for the lovely comment you passed by.. :) ~olive eloisa
Date: 4/26/2015 4:16:00 AM
This captures the heart and imagination of your readers. Your poem truly set forth what you feel. It has all the element of being interesting to read, and the colorful imagery releases your reader from their dull moments and leads them to the journey you have created. Nice reading this, kabayan. Thank you. (^_^) Noel
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:21:00 AM
thank much kabayan I hope the judge will be convinced though.. as i took a chance on how o interpret the theme.. :)
Date: 4/25/2015 11:28:00 AM
Stunning first line, what a way to introduce a poem, and what a great poem to introduce. Nice words.
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Date: 4/29/2015 6:27:00 AM
thanks much Scott.. :)!!!
Date: 4/25/2015 10:41:00 AM
As always the author pours out her soul and paints her words with experience and emotion. Emile.
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Date: 4/29/2015 6:26:00 AM
thanks much Emile.. :)! :)
Date: 4/25/2015 10:15:00 AM
Soon nerves and pulses will merge, amidst reliving previous scenes. For I'll be waiting for she, arms open like loving dreams. Another wonderful poem little one, hugs aplenty soon//Dino James xxxx
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Date: 4/26/2015 10:47:00 PM
Huge James, I dance along with your comment. know why? they are a beauty, can't deny.. :)!!! (((hugs)))~olive eloisa.. :)~
Date: 4/25/2015 8:34:00 AM
WOW Beautiful Olive Simply Beautiful.
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Date: 4/26/2015 10:13:00 PM
Hi Milton, thank you for dropping your beautiful comment!~olive eloisa :)!
Date: 4/24/2015 1:56:00 PM
- A poem I enjoy reading, dear Olive - It is really beautiful - I wish you and your family one beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/25/2015 6:16:00 AM
Amiga Anne Lise, thank you for dropping by.. :)!! I wish you will have a blessed weekend too and i hope your father doing great.. :)! hugs back tight and warm//olive eloisa :)!
Date: 4/24/2015 10:55:00 AM
Filled with love and desire Olive - I especially love the final couplet:-) Hugs Janxx
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Date: 4/25/2015 6:12:00 AM
thank you so much Jan.. :)!!! I always appreciate your drop by.. :)!!! Indeed, it must be read as like how you perceive it.. :)!!! hugs back~olive eloisa :)!

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