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When Nature Speaks


Two hearts beside thee
such warmth ready to explode
captured we will be ~

Above the event
melded souls meet combustion
reciprocated ~

In their aftermath
natures now vociferous 
have two hearts spoken?




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Poet Destroyer A

March 29, 2015 at 10:25 PM

Once again thank you for the reply...LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

March 24, 2015 at 6:23 PM

hey this was really good, James. Glad to see it got a top spot. Congrats to you.

James Fraser

March 25, 2015 at 1:30 PM

Hiya Andrea, many thanks. I so loved writing this poem, James :)

Jan Allison

March 24, 2015 at 3:16 PM

I am so sorry I missed this James it was posted at the time dad went into hopsice - congrats on your well deserved top spot:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Jan Allison

March 24, 2015 at 3:31 PM

Hope the hearts continue to beat in perfect harmony:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

March 24, 2015 at 3:26 PM

Hiya Jan, no worries girl, you had so much on your mind then. I loved writing this poem as it means so much to me ;-) // hugs // James xx

Constance La France

March 23, 2015 at 6:18 PM

James, congratulations on your win with this awesome poem, well done, a perfect 7 . . .

James Fraser

March 24, 2015 at 3:20 PM

Thank you so much Broken Wings, much appreciated, James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

March 22, 2015 at 10:35 PM

BIG CONGRATULATIONS huge James.. :D! weeeeeee treat! treat! :D! //olive eloisa

James Fraser

March 24, 2015 at 2:56 PM

Okies little one, my treat then :-) Tell me what you'd like for your treat ;-) is it hugs of many on natures breeze, over mountains and many seas. Soon to land on Oliz's shore, hugs aplenty plus 20 score ;-) your Dino James xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

March 24, 2015 at 1:35 AM

:P I'll not be the one to treat you,:D as you place higher than me.. :D! hahahahah :P

James Fraser

March 23, 2015 at 3:04 PM

Thank you little one, weeeeeee treat me soon, hugs 4U // Dino James xxxx

Paul Callus

March 22, 2015 at 3:19 PM

Combustion propelled you into first place, James! Excellent set of haiku! Merited congratulations to you! // paul

James Fraser

March 23, 2015 at 2:37 PM

Thank you kindly Paul for your always kind words. I loved penning this poem. A blessed evening to you and yours // James :)

Poet Destroyer A

March 22, 2015 at 1:42 PM

James, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA

James Fraser

March 23, 2015 at 2:21 PM

Hiya Linda, thank you so much for this late Valentine surprise. Wow, I'm smiling so much as this poem means a lot to me. Many hugs for you, James :) :)

David Meade

February 22, 2015 at 9:27 PM

Combustion -- heat, love and light -- these are what makes two hearts sing!! Well done James. 7 Need to write and post again soon.

James Fraser

February 26, 2015 at 2:43 PM

Thank you kindly David, indeed, two hearts sang. Have a lovely afternoon, evening, James :)

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2015 at 7:57 PM

Your title goes so well with your write, James. i love that last one. Two hearts HAVE spoken thru your poetry.

James Fraser

February 21, 2015 at 4:10 AM

Hiya Andrea, indeed two hearts speak as one. Have a blessed weekend, James :) :)

James Peranteau

February 18, 2015 at 9:16 AM

This write my poetic friend, after an indepth reading, is for sure a climatic event unfolded before your readers ! And I enjoyed your celebration of accomplishment using this beautiful form to express your adulation fine sir ! Thanx for this awesome read James. Have a wonderful week........much love, james

James Fraser

February 21, 2015 at 2:59 AM

Hiya James, how are you and Noah? Thanks kindly as always for your lovely comments, they indeed make me smile widely. Glad you liked this little piece as it has meaning for me. A blessed weekend to you Sir, your Scottish Poetry friend, James :)

M. L. Kiser

February 9, 2015 at 3:05 AM

Indeed they have! Beautifully done.

James Fraser

February 21, 2015 at 2:57 AM

Thank you MLK, nature has spoken. Have a lovely weekend, James :)

Sara Kendrick

February 7, 2015 at 3:25 PM

My arthritis hands won't form a heart-shaped cup anymore but this one paints a heart in love..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the encouraging uplifting comment..I am glad that you see some improvement in my work..I have been learning but not perfect in means of the word..I want to do better and better with each work that I write..Sara

James Fraser

February 7, 2015 at 3:35 PM

Hey girl, nobody's perfect all of the time. Nobody's perfect we are what we are ( Mike & the Mechanics ) listen Sara ;-) xx - much hugs to you always, James xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

February 6, 2015 at 5:06 AM

the first set is my fave among the rest.. :)! weeeeee, if two hearts want to be, they will speak.. :)! --olive eloisa

James Fraser

February 7, 2015 at 2:59 PM

Look inside my mind, to what I've written about. Simply read between my lines, then, let it shout out. Trust me my words are there, to never let you stare. If you know me like you do, when nature speaks, you'll view - hugs, James xx