When Nature Awakens

chirping birds, echoes sounds of heaven, rejoicing at the dawn of day

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/23/2010 11:53:00 PM

a image of waking and looking out the window, lovely image lol, enjoyed your write..P.D.

Kris Walters

Date: 8/23/2010 6:09:00 PM

I love this time of day and this captures the sounds and feel. Lovely! Thank you for your encouraging comments on my poems :) Hugs, kris

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/23/2010 4:02:00 PM

cape town? wow. i feel something, i dont know what it is but i feel something. like i reached anothe part of the world. i'm in the middle of the USA st. louis mo. have you ever seen the arch? john

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/23/2010 12:24:00 PM

Breathtaking and lovely Wilma my friend.. such a joy to read u and your lovely comments to me today.. we are having fun..its already Tuesday here.. wow time flies...here... leaving on Wednesday to see my son in Mississippi flying to USA from Iraq after his surgery luv.. keep u updated and thankxxx ..luv...

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/23/2010 8:33:00 AM

Very good Haiku, hanks for listening to me ramble lol always Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/23/2010 7:45:00 AM

There's a wonderfully uplifting quality to this imaginative haiku, Wilma. Thanks also for your kind words on Facebook. Today is the day. We'll see how it goes. Love your poem and you, dear, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/23/2010 7:44:00 AM

lovely, Wilma, just lovely

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/23/2010 7:12:00 AM

A nice haiku penning a nice picture when nature awakens