Notes About The Poem

Originally published: 26th September 2019

Image: gR

This Poem was placed 1st in the "ALL YOURS March 20"  Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand (Judged 20th April 2021)

This poem was inspired by songs I heard in the '60s on "Junior Choice" (A UK radio show that played children's requests and ran between 1954 - 1982).

When My Radio Could Sing

the swinging sixties never swung
as much as people said
but for me, the bands
and the songs they sung
linger on inside my head

I rocked and rolled to morningtown
on a wagon with one wheel
and followed tracks 
that took me down 
to fields that felt unreal.

a jungle snake both sang and hissed
when a man climbed on his cloud
then a windmill turned
in the autumn mist
and a policeman laughed out loud

in a warm and gentle wonderland
on a train whose whistle blew
a swinging star
introduced his band
and sang a rainbow too

God only knows when I look back
why the miller told his tale
and I can’t explain
why grocer jack
turned a whiter shade of pale

but I'm thankful for those days back then
before the years rolled by
those were the days
in dreams and when
there was spirit in the sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kendrick Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 2:47 PM
We listened to the radio some back in the day when I was young and we did not own a TV. My mother always wanted to listen to town topics so she would be up to date. Daddy would listen to a ball game sometimes. When they were changing shifts there was something different on the radio like some music which I liked. Then when I got to be a teenager, music was on while I did my homework. When I married, I listened to the music on the radio, but now, only when I'm in the car. Sara K
Radice Avatar
March 25, 2026 at 2:26 PM
Thanks Sara. I think radio can make great company at times. I love it. Without pictures it helps and encourages listeners to develop great imagination. Cheers - Gary
Ashley Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 9:10 AM
Dear Gary, your ingenious poetic pen pays tribute to songs we grew up with in this enchanting poem filled with wonderful rhythm, rhymes and musical references cleverly tucked into the verses. Lovely nostalgia and splendid poetry. Such a joy to read. A fav! Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. I'm honored to share the podium with you. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 8:28 AM
Ah yes! I see it all clearly now. Thank you for the list. Your creativity is truly amazing. Many of the references were apparent to me but some were not and after reviewing your list I admire your clever verse even more! Your poetic pen, does indeed, flow with gold :)
Radice Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 11:57 PM
Thanks Susan. Reading it now, six years on, I think I can still remember all the songs referenced. Here goes then: the words 'linger on' from 'Goodbye' by Mary Hopkin. Morningtown by The Seekers. One Wheel On My Wagon by The New Christy Minstrels. Strawberry Fields Forever by The Beatles. Trust in me - a song sung by the snake in Jungle Book. :) Get off of my cloud by The Rolling Stones. A windmill in old Amsterdam by Ronnie Hilton. Puff The Magic Dragon by Peter Paul and Mary. The Laughing Policeman by Charles Penrose. The White Horses by Jackie (Lee). The Runaway Train by Vernon Dalhart. Swinging On A Star by Doris Day. Sgt Pepper by The Beatles. Sing A Rainbow by Anita Harris. God Only Knows by The Beach Boys. A Whiter Shade Of Pale (Miller reference and title) by Procul Harum. I Cant Explain by The Who. Grocer Jack (Excerpt from a Teenage Opera) by Keith West. Days by The Kinks. Those Were The Days by Mary Hopkin. In Dreams by Roy Orbison. When by The Kalin Twins and Spirit In The Sky by Norman Greenbaum. Cheers - Gary
Toney Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 12:12 AM
Gary, welcome back to the track! Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 1 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 2 has already started.
Radice Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 12:23 AM
Thanks Mark. I'm usually a slow starter in your marathon so this has come as a surprise. Here's hoping I don't run out of steam for the rest of the race. :) Cheers - Gary
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 11:25 AM
This was fabulous. Back when music came from sheer talent. I don't get on here often but this one made my day.
Radice Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 12:33 PM
Thanks Vince. Music is the nearest thing we humans have to a time machine. Cheers - Gary
Calasibetta Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 11:56 AM
Kudos! A wonderful trip down memory lane, all the songs in our hearts and in our heads....how could we forget? Those were the 'good ole days' for sure. Paulette
Radice Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 1:39 AM
Thank you Paulette! There are around 20 songs from the past referenced here and I remember them all as if it were yesterday! :) Cheers - Gary
Sambourne Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 6:05 PM
What a grand trip down memory lane! I especially like the way record titles weave into your tribute of vintage songs. Such an enjoyable read + walk back to youth, slipped into the past. Sincerest regards, Brian
Radice Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 12:43 PM
These songs were the soundtrack to my childhood :) Thanks so much for your comments Brian. Cheers - Gary
Strand Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 3:28 AM
They dont write songs that have beat Gary,anymore..
Radice Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 6:19 AM
Well, if they do Brian perhaps I'm hard of hearing.
Strand Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 3:19 AM
Sory,Not too many,Gary,only radio in my childhood (a crystal set my first personal pocket device)
Radice Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 3:56 AM
There is something about radio that I love. The poem was just as much a homage to radio as it was to the music of my childhood. They went hand in hand. Love the idea of a pocket sized crystal set. Our radio circa late 60s was a massive thing with a big, big dial. :) Cheers - Gary
Gaul Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 6:58 PM
This resounds in its intricate rhyming like a rock and roll classic itself. Simply loved it. Congratulations.
Radice Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 1:13 AM
Thank you Greg for your great comments - so glad you loved it. I've always said that music is the nearest thing we humans have to a time machine. It has the ability to transport people back in time doesn't it? Cheers - Gary
Kauffman Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 11:33 AM
Great job, Gary. I hear the songs singing in my mind and they take me on a sentimental journey! Nice weaving of lyrics and themes. Congrats, kudos and a high five on your win!
Radice Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 12:11 PM
High five back to you Sam and thanks so much. Whenever I write about the music of my childhood I suddenly feel old, yet I'm guessing everyone's favourite music is the music they grew up with. I need to take a day to catch up on my reading of PS poems. Thanks as always Sam. Cheers - Gary
Gauthier Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:30 PM
Music is so very important to us in our teens. Great job at immortalizing your most significant songs, Gary.
Radice Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 10:10 AM
Thank you Line! I found myself singing them as I wrote this! :)
Walker Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 7:21 AM
Gary, congratulations on a winning entry. A clever poem. ~ Sonia
Radice Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 5:21 AM
Thank you Sonia! Most of the music I listened to on the radio back then was from a programme called 'Junior Choice' ..The songs have stayed with me. :)
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