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When My Mother Was Alive

When my Mother was alive, The mail always got through, Recipients were seldom under the weather, And replies were automatic, not automated. There is a folder in which we keep all the replies She got from big people and small people, People in high places, Those down on their luck. Yet despite all their different backgrounds, Of those who were not too much under the weather to reply, There was a common denominator in all the replies That leap out from the page, "We care enough" 'I have read your letter from start to finish', And 'your concern is noted and may be justified', 'This is what we plan to do in relation to your idea', 'I am pleased to tell you' 'After careful consideration and consulting experts in this field' 'I give my personal assurance' Contrast that with today's uncertainty, of firstly, Getting any reply, And if you do what are the chances it is automated. Or if you are lucky to get one that suggests it came from a human, What are the odds of them having read it from start to finish? And if they were not affected by the weather, Having understood the contents. So, what is the reason for this catastrophic breakdown in communication. I am resending my email of the 16th of last Month, Drawing your attention to the one I sent the month previously In which I outlined in detail, The reasons and my ideas on how to remedy the situation, Which I can go into further over drinks. PS Shame about the weather, It never stopped the mail getting through to you, When my Mother was alive.

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Date: 5/4/2020 7:28:00 PM
Thank you. I could not agree with you more, more care, courtesy, and concern should be shown in every area of our lives ( and what the weather of the day is should not be of any consequence)...Shirley
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Date: 5/4/2020 7:56:00 PM
So kind of you to take the time to read Shirley. Research suggests that most will only try again 2 more times before giving up and also it seems the same with invitations to people to dine with us etc. before we stop putting in effort to help them overcome shyness etc. We all have to row our own boat from time to time, so to speak. Very best regards David in NZ

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