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when my ink stops bleeding

when my ink stops bleeding on paper I grab my brushes and scatter paints on canvas 21 February 2022 Notes: Experimenting on a 1 sentence free verse poem with 3-1-3-1-3-1-3-1 pattern inspired by William Carlos Williams, "A Red Wheel Barrow "

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Date: 4/9/2022 12:37:00 AM
I do too! Me too! Me too! Me too!
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Date: 2/25/2022 12:09:00 AM
Aw this is so cleverly executed and lovely, dear Jcb...Am sure your ink will never stop bleeding...Hugs...~ Ani
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Date: 2/21/2022 5:58:00 PM
Love it Jez. It is when masterpieces are born
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Date: 2/21/2022 11:29:00 AM
I do believe your experiment to be a sucess! Your ink has bled a lovely picture!
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Date: 2/21/2022 9:44:00 AM
Nice one.. I hope your ink never stops bleeding..
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Date: 2/21/2022 9:34:00 AM
Wow! Your ink bled an awesome poem.
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Date: 2/21/2022 5:01:00 AM
Very clever--very original. Brilliantly done!
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