JC Brul Poet Free verse

When My Ink Stops Bleeding

when my ink 
stops 
bleeding on paper
I 
grab my brushes
and
scatter paints on
canvas




21 February 2022


Notes: Experimenting on a 1 sentence free verse poem with 3-1-3-1-3-1-3-1 pattern inspired by  William Carlos Williams, "A Red Wheel Barrow "

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Caren Krutsinger April 9, 2022 at 12:37 AM I do too! Me too! Me too! Me too!

Anitha Jayasankar February 25, 2022 at 12:09 AM Aw this is so cleverly executed and lovely, dear Jcb...Am sure your ink will never stop bleeding...Hugs...~ Ani

Valsa George February 21, 2022 at 5:58 PM Love it Jez. It is when masterpieces are born

Silent One February 21, 2022 at 9:44 AM Nice one.. I hope your ink never stops bleeding..

Marilene Evans February 21, 2022 at 9:34 AM Wow! Your ink bled an awesome poem.

Vijay Pandit February 21, 2022 at 5:01 AM Very clever--very original. Brilliantly done!