When Love Dies

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Emile Pinet.


You lash out, speaking ill of love, reeling from wounded feelings. And your pain fuels the anger that battles forgiveness for control. Someone has hurt you: and you want to send that hurt back. A rebuke of love lost to time; and yet, kept alive in memory, nonetheless. Betrayal shook your foundations, as an implosion of trust broke your heart into a thousand pieces. And using anger to shield yourself from the jagged edges of reality, you refuse to acknowledge your part. Your cry is added to the countless others whose tears morphed into anger. We are all subject to our baser needs, whereas desires, hopes, and failures form the clay from which anger takes its shape. Anger allows you to evade sharing any of the blame, and yet, you can't see that; blinded by your pain. And corrosive feelings consume you; spitting up the vile contempt that self-pity wallows in when love dies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/23/2024 6:24:00 AM
Amazing, Emile, you have captured the heart of so many victims today. It is part of the culture wars which predominate in many places - unChristianity demanding rights not guaranteed anywhere. Excellent piece worthy of much thought. Thanks for sharing.
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 11/23/2024 10:52:00 AM
Thanks, Reason. I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 11/14/2024 7:09:00 PM
Dear Lord, please have mercy on the person who hurt so badly like this because of betrayed love. Tend to the anger they feel, and give their soul rest. Amen! This poem is a colorful description of a negative emotion, giving the anger the life it needs to destroy a person at their core. This is really excellent.
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 11/15/2024 6:53:00 AM
Thanks, Miranda; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 11/6/2024 5:41:00 PM
Relatable... the human condition. Intuitive! Xo
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 11/6/2024 7:48:00 PM
Thanks, Crystol; I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 11/2/2024 9:34:00 AM
I know people like this and it's so sad how they can't "get it". Great job and example for your contest.
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 11/2/2024 12:18:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 8/29/2024 12:05:00 PM
Hello Emile, Yes Emile, the pain does hurt when the loves dies. There is a lot of anger that follows. In time passing that anger dies down. I know this i have been through this. thje pain dies so does the anger. my frienbd enjoy your day. /Darlene/
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/29/2024 2:58:00 PM
Hello Emile, Your welc ome. My friend enjoy youjr evening my friend. /DRLENE/
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 8/29/2024 1:23:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 8/29/2024 7:49:00 AM
This poem hits so strong dear emile! Sometimes when emotions take over and when one is hurt yes so many try to hurt back, and thats not right and will one day leave you with regrets! Its a sad place to be and a haunting feeling to experience, when love dies..: sigh! This is a fave for me! Pleasure reading you always sending you light
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 8/29/2024 1:24:00 PM
Thanks, Ink Empress; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter