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When Love Creates

Eyes to eyes now meet Tenderly our lips touch We, adventurous Rhythmic vibrations rejoice When love creates little ones .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/9/2014 1:11:00 PM
Master of Tanka, As your verse immerses In visible light Beyond the old tender night, It grows so beautifully!
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Date: 12/4/2014 7:35:00 AM
Also from me belated congratulations on poem of the day James.
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Date: 12/4/2014 6:53:00 AM
Belated congrats on your poem of the day..Sara
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Date: 12/3/2014 11:46:00 AM
Congrats for the poem of the day James! Very happy for you my dear friend. A day later to visit you read it but better a little late than none at all, James. Lol... Beautifully penned! A 7 for me! Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 12/3/2014 11:21:00 AM
applause to you prince for the POTD .. love the last line!.. huggs
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Date: 12/2/2014 4:13:00 PM
An awesome write. Tanaka always intrigues me. I'll try to write one day. Meanwhile Merry Christmas Season. Regards
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Date: 12/2/2014 4:12:00 PM
Thank you so much to all whom has commented on my poem. My face is smiling widely, being 'Poem of the Day' - It's a poem that I've enjoyed writing. Blessings to all of you, my poetry family, James xx
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Date: 12/2/2014 3:56:00 PM
Awesome tanka, James! Children definitely change your life for the better. I never thought I could love my second one like my first, but the love just grows and grows...congrats to you on being chosen TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/2/2014 3:18:00 PM
James, such a nice tanka, congratulaitons on poem of the day a 7 my friend
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James Fraser
Date: 12/5/2014 12:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve, it sure made me smile, James :)
Date: 12/2/2014 6:48:00 AM
congrats on poem of the day James:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 12:21:00 PM
I have to admit I was quite surprised as I'd only written it last night, thank you Jan xx
Date: 12/2/2014 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations James! A Fav!
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James Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 12:21:00 PM
Glad you like it Maurice, many thanks for stopping by, James :)
Date: 12/1/2014 10:42:00 PM
Outstanding my friend... The pitter patter of little feet....its what love is about
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James Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 1:09:00 PM
It sure is Tim, it sure is, James :)
Date: 12/1/2014 8:57:00 PM
love this tanka, short but with tender loving punches of sweetness and love... :)! the last line is a wow picture imagining my sister and her husband when they hold first their baby.. :) shall fave this!
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James Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 1:00:00 PM
Thank you kindly Olive. Mmm, I love the 'loving punches of sweetness and love' beautiful words, James xx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 6:36:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS!! :D
Date: 12/1/2014 7:59:00 PM
the ancient call to love and make babies . . . so love all over again. Nicely done James.
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James Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 12:56:00 PM
Indeed David, the ancient call, many thanks, James.......
Date: 12/1/2014 7:17:00 PM
Wonderful :)
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James Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Casarah, James xx
Date: 12/1/2014 6:21:00 PM
Wow 5 lines man. 5 lines that pack so much.
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James Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 12:25:00 PM
Thanks kindly Kevin, few words can say so much, James :)
Date: 12/1/2014 5:11:00 PM
LOVE it James! Hugs jan xxx
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James Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 12:22:00 PM
I kinda like it myself Jan, hugs back, James xx