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When Love Creates


Eyes to eyes now meet
Tenderly our lips touch
We, adventurous
Rhythmic vibrations rejoice
When love creates little ones




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Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 12/9/2014 1:11:00 PM

Master of Tanka, As your verse immerses In visible light Beyond the old tender night, It grows so beautifully!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/4/2014 7:35:00 AM

Also from me belated congratulations on poem of the day James.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2014 6:53:00 AM

Belated congrats on your poem of the day..Sara

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/3/2014 11:46:00 AM

Congrats for the poem of the day James! Very happy for you my dear friend. A day later to visit you read it but better a little late than none at all, James. Lol... Beautifully penned! A 7 for me! Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/3/2014 11:21:00 AM

applause to you prince for the POTD .. love the last line!.. huggs

Hamida Yamin

Date: 12/2/2014 4:13:00 PM

An awesome write. Tanaka always intrigues me. I'll try to write one day. Meanwhile Merry Christmas Season. Regards

James Fraser

Date: 12/2/2014 4:12:00 PM

Thank you so much to all whom has commented on my poem. My face is smiling widely, being 'Poem of the Day' - It's a poem that I've enjoyed writing. Blessings to all of you, my poetry family, James xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/2/2014 3:56:00 PM

Awesome tanka, James! Children definitely change your life for the better. I never thought I could love my second one like my first, but the love just grows and grows...congrats to you on being chosen TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda

Eve Roper

Date: 12/2/2014 3:18:00 PM

James, such a nice tanka, congratulaitons on poem of the day a 7 my friend

James Fraser
Date: 12/5/2014 12:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve, it sure made me smile, James :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/2/2014 6:48:00 AM

congrats on poem of the day James:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 12:21:00 PM

I have to admit I was quite surprised as I'd only written it last night, thank you Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/2/2014 6:31:00 AM

Congratulations James! A Fav!

James Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 12:21:00 PM

Glad you like it Maurice, many thanks for stopping by, James :)

Tim Smith

Date: 12/1/2014 10:42:00 PM

Outstanding my friend... The pitter patter of little feet....its what love is about

James Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 1:09:00 PM

It sure is Tim, it sure is, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/1/2014 8:57:00 PM

love this tanka, short but with tender loving punches of sweetness and love... :)! the last line is a wow picture imagining my sister and her husband when they hold first their baby.. :) shall fave this!

James Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 1:00:00 PM

Thank you kindly Olive. Mmm, I love the 'loving punches of sweetness and love' beautiful words, James xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 6:36:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS!! :D