When Love Became You

I was there when love became you. It spread across your eyes and smile, left a breathless caressing hue and whisper of softest beguile. Aching for your gentle embrace, yearning for the pulsing heartbeat that your touch fetches with its trace skimming my skin in burning heat. I succumb to your calm shadow arching with fresh unbound pleasure. Growing fury of ebb and flow, recurring sensual treasure. You raise my heated eagerness with sweet, sultry, seductive eyes. My breath, catching in meagerness, ceding in dramatic surprise. I arise with feverish flush designing a rhythmic motion to entice, encourage first gush in raw unrestrained emotion. Ah, my love, will you stay with me forever and further behoove? We shall grow in greater degree, you and I, without vain reprove. My love, my skillful seducer. In life, I dedicate my all. You have become my producer. In death, I'll hear your lustful call. Your salacious murmurs teasing torrid desire in me anew. Your voice passionately pleasing. I was there when love became you.
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Daniels Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 4:45 AM
Lovely. Delicate, yet strong. Past, present and future nicely woven together. Loved “death “ and “lustful” in same line. Kind of negates the seemingly shadow side of death. Xx
Fowler Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Many thanks Ghairo. I appreciate your insightful comments. :)
M  Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 3:11 PM
Whoa L.O…..that made me blush!! Haha….Brilliantly written my friend and the last line and Title are perfect….love it! Debx
Fowler Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 5:03 PM
Hello my sweet friend! Nah...a long, loving relationship....:) I am glad you stopped by today! Thank you! :)
Alhemaidy Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 1:23 PM
Yes, very romantic enjoyed read.
Fowler Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 2:30 PM
Thank you Abdullah. I am pleased your enjoyed reading this poem. :)
Cunningham Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 10:18 AM
A very romantic verse Linda, may you both have many more happy years together. Tom
Fowler Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 10:39 AM
Many thanks Tom. :)
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