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When Life was Simple

When we lived beneath thatch-roofed houses, Curry simmered in pots, Flames flickered from firewood gathered From hills and thickets. When bullock carts creaked Under paddy loads, Harvests reaped from fertile fields, Bicycles spun on dusty roads. When sounds of hand-pounding paddy Echoed from homes everyday, Women weaving at fly- shuttle looms Sometimes till late night. And when caws of the crows And chirpings of tea cricket at dusk heard. Then we helped one another - Life was simple,self reliant,and beautiful.

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Date: 5/17/2025 8:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your sixteen beautiful lines poem, Akham :) - hugs
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/17/2025 9:29:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/16/2025 1:26:00 AM
memories can help to survive, getting old is always complicating things, take care poet
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/17/2025 5:29:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/15/2025 4:13:00 PM
You have painted such a picture of the past that is pure and so nostalgic. A lovely write.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/17/2025 9:19:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/13/2025 1:44:00 AM
- Even though we didn't have much... life was simpler after all, Akham - A lovely look back in time - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/13/2025 4:34:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/12/2025 12:34:00 PM
yessir....grew up in a small country town and milk bottles were delivered by horse and wagon..........len
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/12/2025 7:22:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/12/2025 6:12:00 AM
You've brought a common nostalgia to light. I also miss the "good old days". I love your descriptive poem.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/12/2025 8:53:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/12/2025 12:47:00 AM
Ah the simplicity of life youv woven in a very nostalgic manner! How descriptive and creative and through your words i could feel and sense everything youv described! So picturesque and soul warming! Pleasure reading your poem dear akham. Sending you light always
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/12/2025 5:00:00 AM
Thank you

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