When Life was Simple

Third in the Write Sixteen Beutiful Lines Poetry Contest



When we lived beneath thatch-roofed houses,
Curry simmered in pots,
Flames flickered from firewood gathered
From hills and thickets.

When bullock carts creaked
Under paddy loads,
Harvests reaped from fertile fields,
Bicycles spun on dusty roads.

When sounds of hand-pounding paddy
Echoed from homes everyday,
Women weaving at fly- shuttle looms
Sometimes till late night.

And  when caws of the crows
And chirpings of tea cricket at dusk heard.

Then we helped one another -
Life was simple,self reliant,and beautiful.

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Date: 8/7/2025 9:25:00 AM
this is beautiful! did you win a contest with it? Then well-deserved
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Date: 5/17/2025 8:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your sixteen beautiful lines poem, Akham :) - hugs
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/17/2025 9:29:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/16/2025 1:26:00 AM
memories can help to survive, getting old is always complicating things, take care poet
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/17/2025 5:29:00 PM
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Date: 5/15/2025 4:13:00 PM
You have painted such a picture of the past that is pure and so nostalgic. A lovely write.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/17/2025 9:19:00 AM
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Date: 5/13/2025 1:44:00 AM
- Even though we didn't have much... life was simpler after all, Akham - A lovely look back in time - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/13/2025 4:34:00 AM
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Date: 5/12/2025 12:34:00 PM
yessir....grew up in a small country town and milk bottles were delivered by horse and wagon..........len
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/12/2025 7:22:00 PM
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Date: 5/12/2025 6:12:00 AM
You've brought a common nostalgia to light. I also miss the "good old days". I love your descriptive poem.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/12/2025 8:53:00 AM
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Date: 5/12/2025 12:47:00 AM
Ah the simplicity of life youv woven in a very nostalgic manner! How descriptive and creative and through your words i could feel and sense everything youv described! So picturesque and soul warming! Pleasure reading your poem dear akham. Sending you light always
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/12/2025 5:00:00 AM
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